Question

Here is chapter seven of my story please tell me what you think. Also, You can find the rest of the stories here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/333937067-love-is-forbidden

Answer 1

Chapter Seven:

As I am laying in bed with Jeremy, I start to toss and turn. My body temperatures begin to heat up. I feel Jeremy start to shake me, but in my head, I think it's Axton hurting me. I see me and Axton swimming in a lake together, but then takes my legs and drags me down. I wake up with sweat pouring down my face as I run out of breath in my nightmare. I started crying and told Jeremy I needed to see Axton one more time. I can tell Jeremy hates that idea, but I told him if I don't go then I can never sleep well. Jeremy agrees but says he will seat outside of the hotel as you talk to him. I nod and we head over to the hotel. I take a deep breath as I get out of the car and walk into the hotel. As I walk up to the room, I knock on the door, and Axton answers. I can tell he was surprised and that he was crying all night. I ask if I can come in and he nods and moves out of the way. I go to sit on the couch and Axton pulls a chair from the table and sits about eight feet away from me.

"I would like to say... I know that wasn't you and I can't leave you. There is a part of me that is attached to you."

Axton looked up and I can tell he wasn't expecting me to say that. "You wouldn't believe me if I told you".

"You can tell me, there is nothing I wouldn't believe from you."

He exhales and says, "I see Satan and he says things about you that get me upset then as I go to hit him, he keeps his image but projects the pain and hurt onto you."

I start to smile and Axton looks confused. I stand up and jump up and down excitedly. "I knew you would never hurt you, just out of curiosity though what would he say about me?".

"Well, he would say things like you are using me, that you don't love me, and kept talking about your body in a perverted way."

I couldn't believe it. Axton was just being protective. "I feel so bad now that Jeremy hurt you."

Axton looked down at the ground. "I am sorry I hurt you when you were trying to tell me good news. I saw the ring and wanted to congratulate you, but then he said, you would leave me behind and sleep with Jeremy without even thinking about me. I just got so mad that I wanted to take my anger out on him, but I hurt you instead. I was crying the whole night."

I put my hands under my chin and look at him. "I need to tell you a few things too."

Axton looks up and nods.

"Well, first I didn't want to come in saying that I am getting married or Sandwich like that. I wanted to tell you that we are all moving in with him and that I said I wouldn't marry him without you and Caleb by my side. Secondly, I also see someone like how you see Satan."

Axton's face went from sad and tight to relax and surprised. "Really if I listened to my gut I knew you would never leave me and hold up you see someone too, who?!".

I smile then proceed to say, "Well I see an older future self of Caleb and he only appears when I am in trouble then he tells me to run."

Axton's face lights up. "So you have like a guardian angel, but you know that it's Caleb?".

I nod.

"Then why didn't you run when I hurt you?".

"It wasn't so much as I couldn't but that I didn't want to. I knew something was up with you and that you wouldn't hurt me."

Axton slowly begins to smile as I stand up and hug him. I look up at him, "C'mon let's pack".

"Really you want me to come with you after what I did?". I nod. "I'll sort of explain it to Jeremy, don't worry about that." I kissed him and we started to pack up. I started to hear footsteps approach the door and as I turned to it, Jeremy was standing at the door. "What's taking so long, did he hurt you again?". I shake my head, explain sort of everything and Jeremy approaches Axton. He punches Axton in his stomach and as try to stop him, he hits me and I fall to the ground. I hear everything Jeremy is doing. I cancel out Jeremy's words and his movement as I try to hear Axton. I don't hear him. I don't even hear him breathing. My face turns white, but my blood begins to boil as I push myself off the ground and move Jeremy out of the way, and presses my head to Axton's chest. I hear nothing so I start to do chest compressions and I start crying. "Please don't leave me, Axton. You were there for me when I was being hurt in the town. You will always be my first love, but I can't have you dying now." I stop doing compressions and start breathing into his lungs. As I move my lips from him, he starts coughing and sits up. I wrap my arms around him. "I am so glad you are okay". I release my arms and go up to Jeremy and start hitting him with my fist weakly. I let my hands sink and I fall to my knees crying.

"I can't lose you guys. I love you too much. Jeremy, he explained everything to me, so please don't hurt him anymore." I pick myself up, takes the little stuff we had in the hotel put it into my arms, help Axton up and carry him to Jeremy's car. Jeremy follows behind us. I lay Axton in the back seat and kiss his head. I put the rest of the stuff into the trunk and leans up against the trunk. As Jeremy approaches me, I apologize and kiss him. He smiles and we both get in the car. Caleb was already at school. We got to Jeremy's house and I helped Axton out of the car as Jeremy got the little things we had. All three of us walked up to the house and as we entered, Jeremy sat our things on a table as I took Axton to a bathroom. I sat Axton down on the floor, I grabbed some bandages, acholic wipes, and towels to clean him up. I was in the middle of wrapping his arm when he said, "Why did you get him off of me, you should have let him kill me." I was shocked and kiss his lips. "Don't ever think that you hear me."

He nods and I finish cleaning him up. I help him up and show him to a guest room. He lies on the bed and I tell him to get some rest. He falls asleep as Caleb's bus arrives, I pick him up and we walk back inside. I let him see Axton and he sleeps next to him. I lean against the door and smile. I think I want to marry Axton. I thought I said that in my head, but Jeremy heard me and grabbed my wrist and put me to the wall. "Why would you want to marry him?". I look down, "You wouldn't understand. It's just that we have an unbreakable bond that can't be broken no matter what happens." Jeremy doesn't say anything and just hugs me. "It's fine. I will respect you and your opinions no matter what". I smile and I grab Jeremy's hand as I run to his room. I push him onto the bed and crawl on top of him, "S-someone's in a playful mood." I nod and blush as he said that. "I want to have some fun with you". He smiles. I undress him. I start to ride him as his Sandwich slides into my Sandwich. I let out a moan as I feel it ride up inside me. I start to feel Jeremey's hand touch me up and down the chest. I bite my lip as I bounce a little on his Sandwich. He lets out a moan as he covers his mouth. I uncover his mouth as I rub my fingers down his chest. He starts to get chills. I bounce more on it as I feel it get harder in me. I moan more as I feel him start to Sandwich.

I slide it out of me as I kiss him deeply. I put the cover over him as I go down and suck it off. He grips the bed as I look up a little out of the blanket, I see him looking up and moaning. He moans so loud as I deep throat it and I am nearly done with him as I hear footsteps coming near the room. I get up, not caring I am naked as I open the door and see Axton coming up the hallway. I tell Jeremy I will be right back as he throws a blanket at me. I wrap it around me and step out of the room. I lean up against the wall and Axton stops and looks at me. As he goes to say something, I pull him into the bathroom and drop the blanket. He blushes a deep red as he looks me up and down. I push him to the wall of the bathroom, but he picks me up and puts me on the sink. He kisses my lips and then kisses down my body. I grip his shoulders as he starts to suck me off. I moan loudly as I cover my mouth. He moves his mouth away and backs up to the wall. I can tell he is teasing me. I look at him and pout. He smiles and says, "Does my baby want me to pleasure him?". I nod as he says, "Then beg." I get down on my knees, looking up at him, and beg for him to pleasure me. He pulls me up and pins me to the wall as he kisses my neck, down to my Sandwich. He starts sucking it as I grab the wall and moan loudly. After about thirty minutes, we walked out of the bathroom, he headed to the guest bedroom as I headed down to the living room and fell asleep on the couch. The house was so quiet as everyone slept.

Answer 2

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