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this is what i have of my story (love of a lifetime)
written by me obviously

Chapter 1




Tis was a warm summer night in the middle of july i had just finished the book i was reading when this tall giant walks up to me seeing if i'm alright, his voice as soft as the winds blowing through the trees, “y-yeah i'm fine” i stutter as i look up at him. He extended his hand out to me to help me up. I couldn't help but put my hand into his as he lifted me up with ease. “W-why are you just sitting out here? '' he asked as he settled me on my feet. Oh i was just reading my fav book series i said as i looked up at him and blushed. I-i never got your name i asked. He went silent for a few moments, then with a sharp in hale, “oh my names phoenix” he stated happily.

Answer 1

let me know what you think so far

Answer 2

This is really good. Keep up the great work!!

Answer 3

@dolphan feel free to invite people to this question

Answer 4

Ofc

Answer 5

i like it keep it up

Answer 6

i like it alot keep up with the good work

Answer 7

You already know I love it, hun. It is amazing and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the TERRIFIC work and have a lovely day love. < 3

Answer 8

Great start to your story! Here are some suggestions to help you continue:

Chapter 2

As we walked around the park, Phoenix and I talked about everything from our favorite books to our dreams for the future. I couldn't believe how easy it was to talk to him, like we had known each other for years.

As the night wore on, I realized that I didn't want the evening to end. But eventually, we had to say goodbye. Phoenix walked me to my car, and just before I got in, he leaned in and kissed me softly on the cheek.

I felt a jolt of electricity run through my body as he pulled away, and I knew in that moment that I had fallen for him. Hard.

Over the next few weeks, Phoenix and I went on more dates, exploring the city and trying new things. We went to museums, concerts, and even tried skydiving together.

Every time I was with him, I felt like I was on top of the world. I had never felt this way about anyone before, and I knew that Phoenix was the one for me.

But as the summer came to a close, Phoenix had to leave town for a job opportunity in another state. I was devastated, but I knew that I couldn't hold him back from pursuing his dreams.

We promised to stay in touch, and I held onto the hope that maybe someday, we would be together again.

Chapter 3

Months went by, and Phoenix and I talked on the phone and exchanged letters. But as time passed, our conversations became less frequent, and I started to worry that our love was fading away.

One day, I received a letter from Phoenix, telling me that he had fallen in love with someone else and that he couldn't continue our relationship.

I was heartbroken. I had given my heart to this man, and now he was leaving me for someone else.

But as I read the letter over and over again, I realized that maybe our love wasn't meant to last forever. Maybe it was just a chapter in my life, one that had taught me how to love deeply and passionately.

I took a deep breath and decided to move on, to find someone who would love me for who I am and stay by my side no matter what.

And as I closed the book on my love story with Phoenix, I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared, but that it was time to start a new chapter in my life.

Answer 9

amazing story