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Dolphan:

Here is my song. I wrote it a while ago. I had an theme saved. "Killed herself, and then you'll find how he changed" I still remember when she said goodbye Tears streaming down my face, I couldn't even cry She left a note that said it was her time to go It broke my heart in pieces, I'll never know She killed herself and left me here alone Now I'm just picking up the pieces on my own But something's changing deep inside of me I'm starting to see a new reality I blamed myself for not seeing the signs For not reaching out or saving her in time But now I know that it wasn't all on me Sometimes we can't control what we can't see She killed herself and left me here alone Now I'm just picking up the pieces on my own But something's changing deep inside of me I'm starting to see a new reality Life's too short to dwell on what we've lost We have to cherish every moment, no matter the cost And though she may be gone, her memory remains A constant reminder that life is fragile and mundane She killed herself and left me here alone Now I'm just picking up the pieces on my own But something's changing deep inside of me I'm starting to see a new reality Though she's gone, life goes on And though it hurts, I will carry on.

Midnight97:

whoa, i really really love it

Dolphan:

Thank you.

Midnight97:

if you read some of mine you'll know why

Dolphan:

Where is yours?

Midnight97:

heres one

Midnight97:

A life of war, is gone, never finding life in all of the dead, we gotta fight for our homes and families, we gotta fight for all the life, cuz that's who we are, we gotta fight for all, if we don't all hope is lost and the dark will take over the world and homes, this is why we are called the knights of light!!!! So we gotta fight for all that's light and bereing peace to all! There will be one who will be half light and dark, who will know the way for both powers and to know the way to stop the dark, but there will be no way home after it's done!!

Dolphan:

That is really good.

Midnight97:

I hide and hide, i try to fight, i try to find the light in the dark but i can't hide, they'll find me so what do i do Do i stay and fight or run and hide, where they can't find me? oooooo, i cry and hide, what's so about, to stay and fight? So i'll fight for my home and family even if i get hurt or killed, I can't hide anymore i will need to fight for what's mine and i won't stop for what the warrior in me said to do! So i will fight oooo i will fight, oooo i will fight for all who need it, i will for everyone!!! oooo, will fight, oooo will fight, i will fight!

Midnight97:

@midnight97 wrote:
I hide and hide, i try to fight, i try to find the light in the dark but i can't hide, they'll find me so what do i do Do i stay and fight or run and hide, where they can't find me? oooooo, i cry and hide, what's so about, to stay and fight? So i'll fight for my home and family even if i get hurt or killed, I can't hide anymore i will need to fight for what's mine and i won't stop for what the warrior in me said to do! So i will fight oooo i will fight, oooo i will fight for all who need it, i will for everyone!!! oooo, will fight, oooo will fight, i will fight!
my first song

Dolphan:

That's really good for a first

Midnight97:

thx

Dolphan:

Ofc

Midnight97:

my 2nd song A life Rich and famous for any reason, would be good enough but i can't say it cuz I'm poor out of my heart Yo i know but i can't stand it anymore oh whoa oh whoa, i can't fight like this anymore, i can't hide my misery anymore... Sometimes it is hard to see but I got to go through it for my family, i cry when I lose or i cry when i win, so what's wrong with me? they all say i am out of my mind they say i will never find it, but guess what i did I love to find a pass or the future but when i try i fail but i can't do it I hunt or hide , I cry or laugh. But it does matter cuz everyone is the same in a way but it doesn't matter.. it is hard to see, what i can do this is why I lose They say i am out of my mind They say i'll never find it I think they are right, i'm crazy!!

MAGICKAGE:

WOW Its gret. your an artist! Keep up the good work! ur awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mikewwe13:

Thank you for sharing your song. It's a poignant and heartfelt expression of the pain and growth that can come from losing someone to suicide. It's important to remember that we can't always control the actions of others, but we can control how we respond and grow from our experiences. Your song is a beautiful reminder of that.

Rigo:

fire song 🔥

DeadOfWinter:

I :LOVE IT DAUGHTERERE

DeadOfWinter:

I wanna hear u sing it :0

Dolphan:

Dang. My voice sucks

Midnight97:

don't say that, just sing and sing till your voice doesn't suck, an artist to an artist i think you'll do good :)

LillPerson:

Good Job!

OLIVER69:

I think you did a great job on this and I would love to hear more of your songs so keep writing more. Have a Nice day. < 3

Renne:

I feel like you really brought your truth to this song and that you really spoke your mind. In other words i love it continue to shine!<3

Dolphan:

@renne wrote:
I feel like you really brought your truth to this song and that you really spoke your mind. In other words i love it continue to shine!<3
Thank you I appreciate it.

Arieonna:

that song is amazing

Emma1234:

The song is amazing!!! Keep doing what your doing and you might get somewhere big in your life!

JoshaGOAT:

What a beautiful song

Renne:

@dolphan wrote:
@renne wrote:
I feel like you really brought your truth to this song and that you really spoke your mind. In other words i love it continue to shine!<3
Thank you I appreciate it.
Of course! I will continue to support you as you take off!

gorytrgy:

niceeee

idfkaa:

nice

Dolphan:

Thank you all for the amazing support on this. I have so many more song's to publish and to make. I appreciate it all from you guys. Love you all <3333

flowerpower52:

That’s really good WOW!

SnoKido:

edgy asl negl

ElexusQuimby:

This song is awesome. Amazing job on it. I love it.

Kelsiana14:

it's really good but it would sound really good as like a poem

Tyrun:

Mid

Tyrun:

Very mid

APVX:

Good Job!

FurryCove:

ouuu

gorytrgy:

nice

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