I said I would write a poem yesterday yet I never had time, so here is my first poem, I know it isn't the best- Let me know what I should fix, I know it isn't good- and I'm going to fix it later, just in a rush right now. I'm sorry :

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I said I would write a poem yesterday yet I never had time, so here is my first poem, I know it isn't the best- Let me know what I should fix, I know it isn't good- and I'm going to fix it later, just in a rush right now. I'm sorry :<

I see you smile
I hear your laugh
I'd walk a mile
Each time and a half

You say you're fine
I know you're lying
You pull me in to hug,
My heart gives a small tug

I wish you were mine
You never will be
I wish to decline
These feelings I see

Renne · Answer

...Strong feelings of emotion noticing the small details of a person- <3 do more!

Teddyy · Answer

Thank you!^^

Renne · Answer

Of course!!

Dolphan · Answer

I feel  the emotions in this poem. "I wish to decline
These feelings I see" really hit me hard. I love this. Please continue to make more. I can see this becoming something big one day. Love it!! Great Job!!

Teddyy · Answer

Thank you so much!

Dolphan · Answer

@teddyy wrote:

Thank you so much!

Of course!!

Teddyy · Answer

@dolphan wrote:

@teddyy wrote:

Thank you so much!

Of course!!

Have a wonderful day^^

Arieonna · Answer

i love that poem so much

Teddyy · Answer

Thank you!^^ I tried my best and I think it turned out okay :)

Arieonna · Answer

@teddyy wrote:

Thank you!^^ I tried my best and I think it turned out okay :)

it didn't turn out ok it turned out perfect

Teddyy · Answer

Not PERFECT- but thank you so much!