Feelings down

I feel as if I could cry an ocean. I don't know whether or not its because I miss you. Or if I miss what we have had. Or if I want to cry because I feel like boxes are being stacked on top of me and I am falling closer to the ground. I miss you, I miss our smiles, I miss your hugs and your constant reassurance. you would give to me. I miss knowing your their, and I can talk to you if I need too. I want to play every sad song of on repeat, and cry until I cant anymore. I could sit at the bottom of the shower for hours thinking about me and you while I listen to the sound of billie elish and daniel ceaser while they sing songs about relationships and love. The two things I don't have right now. I want to see you again. feel your warm hand and fingers interlaced with mine everywhere we go. Feel you hold me close when we are in public so other people knew I was yours. You cherished me, you showed me off, you loved having me to yourself, and you woke up one day deciding you don't want that anymore.

I just wrote this. Please judge

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Feelings down

I feel as if I could cry an ocean. I don't know whether or not its because I miss you. Or if I miss what we have had. Or if I want to cry because I feel like boxes are being stacked on top of me and I am falling closer to the ground. I miss you, I miss our smiles, I miss your hugs and your constant reassurance. you would give to me. I miss knowing your their, and I can talk to you if I need too. I want to play every sad song of on repeat, and cry until I cant anymore. I could sit at the bottom of the shower for hours thinking about me and you while I listen to the sound of billie elish and daniel ceaser while they sing songs about relationships and love. The two things I don't have right now. I want to see you again. feel your warm hand and fingers interlaced with mine everywhere we go. Feel you hold me close when we are in public so other people knew I was yours. You cherished me, you showed me off, you loved having me to yourself, and you woke up one day deciding you don't want that anymore.

I just wrote this. Please judge

ddog · Answer

Make me wanna cry

ddog · Answer

Good job

Dolphan · Answer

I tried on it. Thank you

ddog · Answer

@dolphan wrote:

I tried on it. Thank you

Good job sis

Dolphan · Answer

@ddog wrote:

@dolphan wrote:

I tried on it. Thank you

Good job sis

Thank you. I appreciate it

CocoCammron99 · Answer

This is a very good short story. I can feel the pain in this. I absolutely love this.

MoonEthereal · Answer

Love it. I can really Feel the pain in this, Good Job.

Dolphan · Answer

@moonethereal wrote:

Love it. I can really Feel the pain in this, Good Job.

Thank you. I appreciate it.

Arieonna · Answer

wow i love that song so much

Dolphan · Answer

Thank you all.

mikewwe13 · Answer

Thank you for sharing your song lyrics with us. It's clear that you're expressing a lot of strong emotions and personal experiences in your writing. The imagery and metaphors you use, such as crying an ocean and feeling like boxes are being stacked on top of you, are powerful and evocative. The repetition of "I miss" throughout the song adds to the sense of longing and sadness that you are conveying. The reference to listening to sad songs by Billie Eilish and Daniel Caesar is a relatable detail that many people can connect with. Overall, your lyrics are raw and honest, and they offer a glimpse into your personal experiences and emotions. Keep writing and expressing yourself in ways that feel true to you.

Dolphan · Answer

@mikewwe13 wrote:

Thank you for sharing your song lyrics with us. It's clear that you're expressing a lot of strong emotions and personal experiences in your writing. The imagery and metaphors you use, such as crying an ocean and feeling like boxes are being stacked on top of you, are powerful and evocative. The repetition of "I miss" throughout the song adds to the sense of longing and sadness that you are conveying. The reference to listening to sad songs by Billie Eilish and Daniel Caesar is a relatable detail that many people can connect with. Overall, your lyrics are raw and honest, and they offer a glimpse into your personal experiences and emotions. Keep writing and expressing yourself in ways that feel true to you.

Thank you so much

laylasnii13 · Answer

Hey Sis I've been where you are sad barely talk anymore but write your feelings til you can't write anymore life , the devil,people. Gone try to hurt you make you angry at yourself but know I'm here no matter what happens you are unstoppably and a Queen 👑 Love you. sis 🖤💕

HotPockets14 · Answer

I love it, it makes me want to cry cause it reminds me of someone i know but i still love it.

Dolphan · Answer

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Midnight97 · Answer

great job, and keep up the good work <3

TylerTheCreative · Answer

beautiful, your so smart babe

Dolphan · Answer

@tylerthecreative wrote:

beautiful, your so smart babe

Thank you love.

Nerdechely · Answer

beautiful keep up the work.

Dolphan · Answer

Thank you all. I appreciate it. I really do

urdadizhere · Answer

Love it

Nerdechely · Answer

@dolphan wrote:

Thank you all. I appreciate it. I really do

ofc<3

Dolphan · Answer

If you responded to this question, what poem or thought should I do next?