Question

"I did it"
She said as she scored
Her first goal

"I did it..
She said as she held
The Empty bottle of pills


She finally got her happy ending
she was waiting for
Though she is lying on the floor
without a heartbeat
She's happy somewhere

Answer 1

thats deep.

Answer 2

Yeah. It is.

Answer 3

thats amazing Dolphin i never ready any thing like that before when i started reading that at first i thought it was a book

Answer 4

@ddog @krissy525 @tylerthecreative @madz2345 @questioncovebot @dolphina

Answer 5

that goes hard

Answer 6

Yeah. I tried to make it go like that.

Answer 7

Good job

Answer 8

God damn girl. That's deep.

Answer 9

Tbh thats really good a lot of people can relate and a lot people can feel sad about but you just basically explained life for some people its really good and hits deep

Answer 10

damn girl thats deep love it

Answer 11

Thank you all

Answer 12

Wow amazing

Answer 13

Thank you

Answer 14

Sis Love it this goes real Hard and it's deep like deep write more

Answer 15

Thank you

Answer 16

Your song conveys a powerful message about the consequences of seeking happiness through destructive means. The contrast between the celebratory tone of the first two lines and the somber tone of the last two lines creates a poignant effect.

The repetition of "I did it" emphasizes the character's sense of accomplishment and agency, while also highlighting the tragic irony of her success leading to her demise.

The line "She finally got her happy ending she was waiting for" suggests that the character may have been struggling with mental health issues or other challenges that made her feel like she needed to take drastic action to find happiness.

Overall, your song touches on important themes related to mental health and the search for happiness, and it does so in a way that is both thought-provoking and emotionally resonant.

Answer 17

ya the message i read in this was to believe your self

Answer 18

The main message in this, was when she was a little girl, she believed in herself, so she said, I did it. Now she is ending something and she is happy now.

Answer 19

@caydenmorrison

Answer 20

wow, that is harsh, but to say i make more stuff harsh lol

Answer 21

W 😮‍💨!!

Answer 22

i thought it was about soccer

Answer 23

It was, as she was a child. As she went through her teenage years she become less happy

Answer 24

i like it!

Answer 25

Thank you all. It means a lot. It really does

Answer 26

Thats actually good. For once in a while, I've read something decent.

Answer 27

Hey

Answer 28

Thank you all.

Answer 29

This is amazing. Keep you the great work

Answer 30

@nerdechely .

Answer 31

idk this

Answer 32

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Answer 33

what

Answer 34

Soup

Answer 35

Toast

Answer 36

chikeeee babyyyy

Answer 37

kil me

Answer 38

i have depression

Answer 39

what....

Answer 40

Stop responding to this if you are spamming.
@madz2345

Answer 41

I- it's so sad- but so- i can't explain it!

Answer 42

thats fire

Answer 43

I can relate to this, not the laying on the floor, but the empty bottle and how she could actually accomplish what she wanted to. This told me that I can do anything I push myself to do. I enjoyed this and hope you continue to make some more sad, beautiful pieces. It really is a piece of magnificent work. keep up the fabulous work and have a nice day. < 3

Answer 44

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Answer 45

nice

Answer 46

dang

Answer 47

dang thats deep

Answer 48

Lol