Heyyy I’ve begun to work on two stories/books and honestly haven’t given much time recently to one or the other. I’m also not a great writer to (in my opinion) they aren’t very good:/
1. Which one do y’all think I should work on more?
2. Any feedback or constructive criticism?

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Heyyy I’ve begun to work on two stories/books and honestly haven’t given much time recently to one or the other. I’m also not a great writer to (in my opinion) they aren’t very good:/
1. Which one do y’all think I should work on more? 
2. Any feedback or constructive criticism?

JustBeNice · Answer

Clean Assassin: https://docs.google.com/document/d 1PtCAiBkPwl0fpbxoCsjILDFuBQfECBFNql52ItsnkVE/edit Demented: https://docs.google.com/document/d/13LaRVn_3SGf_zKK6rtxZ4EgDWhCgyb05eJaRxc-u0tU/edit

JustBeNice · Answer

Any opinions, suggestions, and constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated:]

lovemelee · Answer

its good but we need more detail like how was she feeling when left from checking on her was she upset or scared like we need more of the character but so far its good

JustBeNice · Answer

Okayy thank youu:)

lovemelee · Answer

yea no problem :))

Dolphan · Answer

This is very good. I agree with Lovemelee

JustBeNice · Answer

Okeyy thank you so muchh:)