Question

Have you ever pushed others away because you think that you don't need them or you are better than others? Or have you ever thought that you will let them be in your life but you have control over them? Well, that is what we call power, and guess what? At the end of the day, they have the choice of whether or not they want to listen to you. Yeah, that's right they have the power of their own actions. Here's what happens next: you get mad and you start to push them and shove them. They choose NOT to fight back with violence. But that does not matter; what matters is that you should not have put your hands on them; most people don't tolerate bullying. Stop bullying, give others a chance to express themselves, and maybe you might see something different just look closely and you just might see that you're making others feel bad so stop bullying, stop by standing, and stop pushing others away instead try to make their day.

Answer 1

This is the first part of my stop bullying essay should I change or fix anything?

Answer 2

very good but it feels rushed love the choice of words at the ending

Answer 3

I think you did a really god job explaining what you should and shouldn't do and how u explained that people do have a choice to stick up for them self's or let it get to them I don't think u need to fix anything

Answer 4

talk about how it may make someone feel

Answer 5

I like dat dis ish towards ze bullies themselves and not towards ze victims. Ish different den wut we usually see. Run it through grammarly tho tbh it helps a lot. keep it up bro<3

Answer 6

or talk about why we think bullying is wrong and what we can do to prevent it

Answer 7

or maybe how many victims conflict pain on others from bullying. overall its good

Answer 8

smexy

Answer 9

lol?

Answer 10

I love the intro. Has a very strong beginning. I love this. Keep up the great work

Answer 11

I think a big thing to talk about also is fight or flight reaction and also when talking about this there is a difference between bullying and self defense self defense has to do if u can't leave the situation even when it comes to the thing u say if u can leave the situation but chose not to it's called bullying but if u can't leave the situation and you say or do something hurtful it's considered self defense bullying effects many people in a lot of ways but you gotta chose not to let it get to you

Answer 12

ihatelifeFS420 its not about fixing anything im giving her criticism about her beautiful work

Answer 13

have you ever heard of constructive criticism?

Answer 14

okay so i write i dont mean to offend her its just im giving her feedback

Answer 15

she could take it or not

Answer 16

either way its good :))

Answer 17

Nu one even said ur being mean about anything bro, they just was giving feedback about ze writing...
gl w/ ze other arts of ze essay renne

Answer 18

yah

Answer 19

midnitesunny no one was talking to you bro

Answer 20

your late so hush please

Answer 21

💀💀💀💀💀💀💀lol k

Answer 22

0.0 so much-