You are more than what you are informed. You are stronger than what you take credit for. You are a queen/king even when you are told you are not and you are strong even when you are told you are weak. I am proud of my skin, and of who I am, you should be proud of yours too. I am radiant, and one of a kind. You will never find someone with a personality quite like mine. Don’t let others hold you back and tell you any different. Don’t let others make you feel less than who you are. I was once told, that if I hold my head low, to those who bully me, I am letting that crown fall off my head, and I am letting those bullies win. So I am here to tell you to keep your head up and be proud of who you are, for you can change the world and make it a better place. So for all my girls who think they are weak, I am here to tell you you are so much stronger than you think, and you don’t have to be a grown-up to change the world just be yourself, and you can show those who doubt you that they have made what we call a mistake. It’s never too late to turn it around for the better. People misunderstand me, but I see my weaknesses as a chance to strive for greatness. I will not let you destroy Me or toy with me, and you may think you know my next move, but I am a mysterious soul.

(I would like some thoughts on this piece before improving my others.)

Question

You are more than what you are informed. You are stronger than what you take credit for. You are a queen/king even when you are told you are not and you are strong even when you are told you are weak. I am proud of my skin, and of who I am, you should be proud of yours too. I am radiant, and one of a kind. You will never find someone with a personality quite like mine. Don’t let others hold you back and tell you any different. Don’t let others make you feel less than who you are. I was once told, that if I hold my head low, to those who bully me, I am letting that crown fall off my head, and I am letting those bullies win. So I am here to tell you to keep your head up and be proud of who you are, for you can change the world and make it a better place. So for all my girls who think they are weak, I am here to tell you you are so much stronger than you think, and you don’t have to be a grown-up to change the world just be yourself, and you can show those who doubt you that they have made what we call a mistake. It’s never too late to turn it around for the better. People misunderstand me, but I see my weaknesses as a chance to strive for greatness. I will not let you destroy Me or toy with me, and you may think you know my next move, but I am a mysterious soul.

(I would like some thoughts on this piece before improving my others.)

MidniteSunny · Answer

hol up while i edit dis rq

Dolphan · Answer

You have no idea how much I love this. "You are a queen/king even when you are told you are not and you are strong even when you are told you are weak" This or that piece right their spoke to me. Keep writing. Your writing is and will touch many hearts. I love this, keep up the great work. Please tag me into the rest of your writings. I enjoy them!!

Renne · Answer

@dolphan wrote:

You have no idea how much I love this. "You are a queen/king even when you are told you are not and you are strong even when you are told you are weak" This or that piece right their spoke to me. Keep writing. Your writing is and will touch many hearts. I love this, keep up the great work. Please tag me into the rest of your writings. I enjoy them!!

Thank you!

Dolphan · Answer

@renne wrote:

@dolphan wrote:

You have no idea how much I love this. "You are a queen/king even when you are told you are not and you are strong even when you are told you are weak" This or that piece right their spoke to me. Keep writing. Your writing is and will touch many hearts. I love this, keep up the great work. Please tag me into the rest of your writings. I enjoy them!!

Thank you!

Of course!

lovemelee · Answer

there you go girl beautiful "you are more than what you are informed" gave me goosebumps

Renne · Answer

@lovemelee wrote:

there you go girl beautiful "you are more than what you are informed" gave me goosebumps

Is that a good thing-?

lovemelee · Answer

@renne duh lmao yes

Renne · Answer

@lovemelee wrote:

@renne duh lmao yes

Ohh okay well thank you!!

lovemelee · Answer

@renne you have a talent in writing keep practicing if i were you i would write a book do something with that knowledge keep going

MidniteSunny · Answer

EDITED VERSION:
You are more than what you are informed about.  You are strong even when others say you are weak. You are a queen/king/royalty even when you are told that you aren't. You are beautiful even if they can't see that.
I am proud of my skin, of who I am, and you should be proud of yours too. I am radiant and one of a kind, as are you. You will never find a personality quite like mine, or yours. Don't let other people hold you back and tell you anything different. Don’t let others make you feel less than who you are. 
I was once told that if I hold my head low, to those who bully me, I am letting my crown fall off my head, thus letting those bullies win. So I am here to tell you to keep your head up and be proud of who you are, because you can change the world and make it a better place. For all the girls who think they are weak, I am here to tell you that you are so much stronger than you think, and you don’t have to be an adult to change the world. Just be your true self and you can show those who doubt you that they have made a mistake by ever underestimating you. 
It’s never too late to turn things around for the better. People misunderstand me, but I see my weaknesses as a chance to strive for greatness. I will not let anyone destroy me or toy with me, and they may think they know my next move, but I am a mysterious soul. And so are you.

Renne · Answer

oooh...Thank you..