I made another poem! I was kind of going through a depressed phase when I wrote this but let me know what you think or what I can fix, thank you

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I made another poem! I was kind of going through a depressed phase when I wrote this but let me know what you think or what I can fix, thank you<3

It's a nice day
Inside I'm dead
I wish I could play
But instead I dread

Going outside
Will I be teased?
I wish I died
No one is ever pleased

What's wrong with me?
Perhaps my smile
I want to plea

Do I ask for too much?
I want to clutch
This happiness
It never lasts
I must impress

Is it my face?
I wish to erase
Myself from this Earth
I have no worth

Dolphan · Answer

This is an amazing poem. I love the part "
Is it my face?
I wish to erase
Myself from this Earth
I have no worth"

It shows true emotion. This poem shows true emotion. I love this. Keep you the great work!!

Teddyy · Answer

@dolphan wrote:

This is an amazing poem. I love the part " Is it my face? I wish to erase Myself from this Earth I have no worth" It shows true emotion. This poem shows true emotion. I love this. Keep you the great work!!

Thank you! ^^

Dolphan · Answer

@teddyy wrote:

@dolphan wrote:

This is an amazing poem. I love the part " Is it my face? I wish to erase Myself from this Earth I have no worth" It shows true emotion. This poem shows true emotion. I love this. Keep you the great work!!

Thank you! ^^

Of Course!

laylasnii13 · Answer

I love it Shows true emotions btw you are worth something And don't erase yourself from this Earth