She looked down at her father, hatred burning away at her. One gun pointed at his... y'know. And the other dead between his eyes. How had she ended up in this horrible mindset..? She loved her father at one point. They were the best of friends. She would put everything in her life on hold for him. But he cost her everything. He made her a monster. She realized, all too late, that he didn't give a damn about her. It was too late for her... But not, she hoped, for Meredith and Kris. "You wouldn't DARE, Evalynn. You love me too much." Those words, from him, sickened her. Before she even understood that her actions were, in fact, her own, both triggers had been pulled. Her father lay in his own pooling blood, dead immediately.

Question

reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx · Answer

horrible

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

I don't know if this should be the start or, maybe the end of a story?

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

bro sthu u mad cus we all on you

12jacklopez · Answer

fr

reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx · Answer

wrd

12jacklopez · Answer

idek what happening

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@12jacklopez wrote:

idek what happening

nah bro's 23 looking for little girls

12jacklopez · Answer

who

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

die

RIGHTTT

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@12jacklopez wrote:

who

reiston

12jacklopez · Answer

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

die

RIGHTTT

polar who is

MelonyJones2010 · Answer

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@12jacklopez wrote:

idek what happening

nah bro's 23 looking for little girls

ONG BRO

12jacklopez · Answer

damn

12jacklopez · Answer

bri got exposed

MelonyJones2010 · Answer

@12jacklopez wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

die

RIGHTTT

polar who is

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx is

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@12jacklopez wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

die

RIGHTTT

polar who is

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx is

^^^^^^^^^^

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

Now that he's gone. We can focus on the task at hand.

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

WHERE DO I PUT THIS AT THE BEGINNING IN THE PROLOGUE OR AT THE END BEFORE THE EPILOGUE

laylasnii13 · Answer

I love this I relate so much it's sad I say in the middle or end

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@laylasnii13 wrote:

I love this I relate so much it's sad I say in the middle or end

Thank you 🤩

laylasnii13 · Answer

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@laylasnii13 wrote:

I love this I relate so much it's sad I say in the middle or end

Thank you 🤩

Always 🖤

suger · Answer

I love it Its a lil bit confusing to me cuz i'm slow as hell but i love it

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@suger wrote:

I love it Its a lil bit confusing to me cuz i'm slow as hell but i love it

It's fine we're all a lil bit slow thats why we're here

LindseyMarti · Answer

I feel like this should be the beginning and then the story slowly reveals why the beginning happened. Like wut caused it.

suger · Answer

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@suger wrote:

I love it Its a lil bit confusing to me cuz i'm slow as hell but i love it

It's fine we're all a lil bit slow thats why we're here

lol frr

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@lindseymarti wrote:

I feel like this should be the beginning and then the story slowly reveals why the beginning happened. Like wut caused it.

LIKE THATS WHAT IM FEELING BUT AT THE SAME TIME THIS WOULD BE A KILLER WAY TO WRAP UP THE STORY

doggofroyo · Answer

bros dad is chester the molester

LindseyMarti · Answer

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@lindseymarti wrote:

I feel like this should be the beginning and then the story slowly reveals why the beginning happened. Like wut caused it.

LIKE THATS WHAT IM FEELING BUT AT THE SAME TIME THIS WOULD BE A KILLER WAY TO WRAP UP THE STORY

FR?

doggofroyo · Answer

it should be the start of a story polar u should def write a book on this

LindseyMarti · Answer

fr fr

LindseyMarti · Answer

id read it

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@lindseymarti wrote:

id read it

bet.

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@djpup @xxderpypugxx RATE MY STORY YOU BUMS

Djpup · Answer

its good

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@djpup wrote:

its good

i know it is. more praise please 😩

Djpup · Answer

its wonderful

MelonyJones2010 · Answer

@djpup wrote:

its wonderful

GRRR BACK OFF

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@djpup wrote:

its wonderful

omg thank you baby 😩

MelonyJones2010 · Answer

NNO

MelonyJones2010 · Answer

Ur grounded.

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

But moooooooooooom

Djpup · Answer

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

Ur grounded.

no shes not only i can do that

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

Ur grounded.

no shes not only i can do that

🥺🙏

MelonyJones2010 · Answer

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

Ur grounded.

no shes not only i can do that

Sthu, ur on thin ice.

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

Ur grounded.

no shes not only i can do that

Sthu, ur on thin ice.

Mom calm down he's good

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

DJ DONT YOU SAY NOTHING

xXDerpyPugXx · Answer

look i just came here for the "bros 23 and looking for little girls"

MelonyJones2010 · Answer

@xxderpypugxx wrote:

look i just came here for the "bros 23 and looking for little girls"

ONG XDD

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@xxderpypugxx wrote:

look i just came here for the "bros 23 and looking for little girls"

😭😭😭

Djpup · Answer

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

Ur grounded.

no shes not only i can do that

Sthu, ur on thin ice.

listen here dude idk who you are and idgaf who you are shes my girl and i can do whatever i want with her so shut up and back off

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

Ur grounded.

no shes not only i can do that

Sthu, ur on thin ice.

listen here dude idk who you are and idgaf who you are shes my girl and i can do whatever i want with her so shut up and back off

THATS MY MOM HUN

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

This is going south quickly.

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

GUYS LISTEN TO THIS SONG

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

Ur grounded.

no shes not only i can do that

Sthu, ur on thin ice.

listen here dude idk who you are and idgaf who you are shes my girl and i can do whatever i want with her so shut up and back off

She's my fking daughter, she went to me when u guys broke up so sthu moron.

MOM

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

guys please the song https://youtu.be/rGYf8-XLDjs

doggofroyo · Answer

:0

doggofroyo · Answer

and I oop

xXDerpyPugXx · Answer

Yknow theres smth yall could do its called sthu and take this to ur dms no one needs whatever is happening here

doggofroyo · Answer

*windex cleaner sound;
skskskkssk*

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@xxderpypugxx wrote:

Yknow theres smth yall could do its called sthu and take this to ur dms no one needs whatever is happening here

shut up savius and praise my story

Djpup · Answer

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

Ur grounded.

no shes not only i can do that

Sthu, ur on thin ice.

listen here dude idk who you are and idgaf who you are shes my girl and i can do whatever i want with her so shut up and back off

She's my fking daughter, she went to me when u guys broke up so sthu moron.

guess what shes mine now i her man and shes mine to take care of so Cheese yo old ahh down

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

Ur grounded.

no shes not only i can do that

Sthu, ur on thin ice.

listen here dude idk who you are and idgaf who you are shes my girl and i can do whatever i want with her so shut up and back off

She's my fking daughter, she went to me when u guys broke up so sthu moron.

guess what shes mine now i her man and shes mine to take care of so Cheese yo old ahh down

DONT CALL HER OLD SHES ONLY 18

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

Guys pls the song

Maya12 · Answer

Yall need to calm down

xXDerpyPugXx · Answer

@doggofroyo wrote:

*windex cleaner sound; skskskkssk*

but do you have a hydroflask.

Djpup · Answer

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

Ur grounded.

no shes not only i can do that

Sthu, ur on thin ice.

listen here dude idk who you are and idgaf who you are shes my girl and i can do whatever i want with her so shut up and back off

She's my fking daughter, she went to me when u guys broke up so sthu moron.

guess what shes mine now i her man and shes mine to take care of so Cheese yo old ahh down

DONT CALL HER OLD SHES ONLY 18

im talking to you dumbahh

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@xxderpypugxx wrote:

@doggofroyo wrote:

*windex cleaner sound; skskskkssk*

but do you have a hydroflask.

i want one

doggofroyo · Answer

i broke mine

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@djpup wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

Ur grounded.

no shes not only i can do that

Sthu, ur on thin ice.

listen here dude idk who you are and idgaf who you are shes my girl and i can do whatever i want with her so shut up and back off

She's my fking daughter, she went to me when u guys broke up so sthu moron.

guess what shes mine now i her man and shes mine to take care of so Cheese yo old ahh down

DONT CALL HER OLD SHES ONLY 18

im talking to you dumbahh

dont call my mom old.

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

ill fight u

Djpup · Answer

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

Ur grounded.

no shes not only i can do that

Sthu, ur on thin ice.

listen here dude idk who you are and idgaf who you are shes my girl and i can do whatever i want with her so shut up and back off

She's my fking daughter, she went to me when u guys broke up so sthu moron.

guess what shes mine now i her man and shes mine to take care of so Cheese yo old ahh down

DONT CALL HER OLD SHES ONLY 18

im talking to you dumbahh

dont call my mom old.

yes dear

xXDerpyPugXx · Answer

@doggofroyo wrote:

i broke mine

they can b r e a k ?

doggofroyo · Answer

I threw it

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@xxderpypugxx wrote:

@doggofroyo wrote:

i broke mine

they can b r e a k ?

i wasn't aware of this.

xXDerpyPugXx · Answer

@doggofroyo wrote:

I threw it

whyyyy

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@doggofroyo wrote:

I threw it

How about- hear me out- you throw me instead

doggofroyo · Answer

:0

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

im very fun to throw

Maya12 · Answer

Lol

Djpup · Answer

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@doggofroyo wrote:

I threw it

How about- hear me out- you throw me instead

no only i can do that

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@djpup wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@doggofroyo wrote:

I threw it

How about- hear me out- you throw me instead

no only i can do that

I-

doggofroyo · Answer

ok Ill throw you like a rag doll

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup I hope you die, no one ever changes, and you sure as hell didn't so sybau and go touch some grass mdf.

MOM

MelonyJones2010 · Answer

I'm done.

xXDerpyPugXx · Answer

@doggofroyo wrote:

ok Ill throw you like a rag doll

please throw her against a brick wall ill pay for the damages

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@xxderpypugxx wrote:

@doggofroyo wrote:

ok Ill throw you like a rag doll

please throw her against a brick wall ill pay for the damages

ill pay for the surgiess

doggofroyo · Answer

bet.

Maya12 · Answer

Olivia ima throw u to the water

doggofroyo · Answer

no you wont jasmine.

xXDerpyPugXx · Answer

ty kind sir and or maam

doggofroyo · Answer

ill fling you liek a slingshot.

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@doggofroyo wrote:

ill fling you liek a slingshot.

YAYY

Djpup · Answer

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup I hope you die, no one ever changes, and you sure as hell didn't so sybau and go touch some grass mdf.

damn mans is dumb if no one can change your basically saying your daughter cant change who she is even if she tried basically calling her a failure thats said cuz people can actually change if they wanted too

Maya12 · Answer

@doggofroyo wrote:

no you wont jasmine.

Yes i am just wait for me

doggofroyo · Answer

SCREAM

Maya12 · Answer

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup I hope you die, no one ever changes, and you sure as hell didn't so sybau and go touch some grass mdf.

@ddog

Damn🤦‍♀️

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

Mom please-

MelonyJones2010 · Answer

@maya12 wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@djpup I hope you die, no one ever changes, and you sure as hell didn't so sybau and go touch some grass mdf.

@ddog

Damn🤦‍♀️

Real

Maya12 · Answer

Rip

MelonyJones2010 · Answer

@crazyhotghost wrote:

Mom please-

I said I was done, I don't know why he's still going.

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

Mom please-

I said I was done, I don't know why he's still going.

BOTH OF YOU STOP IT :<<<<

doggofroyo · Answer

jasmine i dont want to be thrown ;-;

xXDerpyPugXx · Answer

this was no unnecessary

MelonyJones2010 · Answer

He's a coward.

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

DJ IF YOU DIGNIFY THIS WITH A RESPONSE SO HELP ME GOD.

Maya12 · Answer

Guys say bye to Olivia ima throw her out to the water today

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@maya12 wrote:

Guys say bye to Olivia ima throw her out to the water today

NO DONT THROW MY LIVVV

doggofroyo · Answer

WHY WHAT HAVE I DONE TO YOU

MelonyJones2010 · Answer

Bye Oli :>

doggofroyo · Answer

:-;

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

DONT THROW LIV

doggofroyo · Answer

By H.I.M

doggofroyo · Answer

bye Polar

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

MelonyJones2010 · Answer

TvT

Maya12 · Answer

Olivia u ready

doggofroyo · Answer

look on the bright side

doggofroyo · Answer

my notifi popping off

doggofroyo · Answer

yes.. ma am

doggofroyo · Answer

im ready to see God

reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx · Answer

stop free chatting

Maya12 · Answer

Ok pack ur shi then

xXDerpyPugXx · Answer

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

He's a coward.

Respectfully. I dont know you and I dont want to. Let me just say this all started when DJ complimented Polar's story and you went off. I dont know what problem you have with DJ, but if its cause they broke up I would like to say both are on fair terms. This was unnecessary.

doggofroyo · Answer

ok

doggofroyo · Answer

jeez fine reison we didnt mean to

MelonyJones2010 · Answer

[

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

stop free chatting

Pedo.

reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx · Answer

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

[

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

stop free chatting

Pedo.

how

MelonyJones2010 · Answer

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

[

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

stop free chatting

Pedo.

how

You come here often?

Maya12 · Answer

ok Olivia u better get ready rn

reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx · Answer

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@melonyjones2010 wrote:

[

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

stop free chatting

Pedo.

how

You come here often?

Not really

LindseyMarti · Answer

WHAT HAPPENED

LindseyMarti · Answer

i was gone
and I SEE THIS

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@lindseymarti wrote:

i was gone and I SEE THIS

YEA ITS ALOT LMAO

LindseyMarti · Answer

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@lindseymarti wrote:

i was gone and I SEE THIS

YEA ITS ALOT LMAO

WELL SH

andrew4life · Answer

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

bro mad stupid this is good its god

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

bro mad stupid this is good its god

omg thank youuuu

reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx · Answer

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

bro mad stupid this is good its god

Djpup · Answer

its ok taj its good

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

bro mad stupid this is good its god

sthu

Djpup · Answer

its bootiful

reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx · Answer

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

bro mad stupid this is good its god

sthu

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@djpup wrote:

its bootiful

i know. like me.

Djpup · Answer

yes and me

reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx · Answer

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

bro mad stupid this is good its god

sthu

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

bro mad stupid this is good its god

sthu

NO CUS LITERALLY GO AWAY YOU FKN STALKER YOU'RE BOTHERING MY SOULLLL

reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx · Answer

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

bro mad stupid this is good its god

sthu

NO CUS LITERALLY GO AWAY YOU FKN STALKER YOU'RE BOTHERING MY SOULLLL

andrew4life · Answer

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

nah frrr

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

bro mad stupid this is good its god

sthu

NO CUS LITERALLY GO AWAY YOU FKN STALKER YOU'RE BOTHERING MY SOULLLL

reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx · Answer

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

nah frrr

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

bro mad stupid this is good its god

sthu

NO CUS LITERALLY GO AWAY YOU FKN STALKER YOU'RE BOTHERING MY SOULLLL

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

nah frrr

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

bro mad stupid this is good its god

sthu

NO CUS LITERALLY GO AWAY YOU FKN STALKER YOU'RE BOTHERING MY SOULLLL

im going to hurt you.

reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx · Answer

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

nah frrr

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

bro mad stupid this is good its god

sthu

NO CUS LITERALLY GO AWAY YOU FKN STALKER YOU'RE BOTHERING MY SOULLLL

im going to hurt you.

e punch me

andrew4life · Answer

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

lol this bro mad stupid

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

nah frrr

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

bro mad stupid this is good its god

sthu

NO CUS LITERALLY GO AWAY YOU FKN STALKER YOU'RE BOTHERING MY SOULLLL

im going to hurt you.

e punch me

CrazyHotGhost · Answer

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

nah frrr

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@crazyhotghost wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

@andrew4life wrote:

@reisonstixxxxxxxxxxx wrote:

horrible

bro mad stupid this is good its god

sthu

NO CUS LITERALLY GO AWAY YOU FKN STALKER YOU'RE BOTHERING MY SOULLLL

im going to hurt you.

e punch me

ill e bite u

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