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lovemelee:

just an old poem Screams fill my ears eyes wide and wet I can only sit and fret I want to evaporate. this decision is not up for debate left with my heart in your hand you stomp on it and it crumbles just like crayons evaporating slowly inside all i do is question why .why was it so hard to tell me goodbye i sit there and watch you sigh like it my fault that i cry oh no! Here he comes people it time to set my feelings aside tie them up and wave goodbye fix my face time to smile we might have to act for a while but remember it's not okay to pretend every wind-up toy has its end.

cjmick26:

dang thats deep

Dolphan:

This is very deep. I love the part where it said, " Here he comes people it time to set my feelings aside tie them up" I can relate to that part. Great job, I mean it

Hislilbaby102:

This is amazing and very deep i really like it 💚💚

chuckthedonut:

Everyone is saying that this is deep and I agree. Did anything inspire you to make this? Nice job btw! :D

lovemelee:

@chuckthedonut a lot of guys used me a lot at a very young age. i love to easily but its hard to let go. i feel like when people leave me they feel nothing so i wrote abt how i feel when they do leave me lol hope that make sense

laylasnii13:

Love this I feel the emotions you were aiming At its deep and heart-felt 💕 Keep it Up

chuckthedonut:

@lovemelee wrote:
@chuckthedonut a lot of guys used me a lot at a very young age. i love to easily but its hard to let go. i feel like when people leave me they feel nothing so i wrote abt how i feel when they do leave me lol hope that make sense
That makes sense...and wow, that's sad, I'm sorry that they did that to you, I think you did an amazing job, keep it up :)

lovemelee:

thank you guys for the honest comments :)) yall really out here making me blush

Maya12:

omg girl i love this keep up the work<3

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