Question

Tell me what I did, to deserve this


You caused me a lot of damage, and you don't see it, can't you?
I did absoluetly nothing to you, besides be here for you, through your ups and downs.
I was even here when you hurt me.
What did I do to deserve this pain?
Why did you have to do me like that?
I promised to stick with you, beside you
You hurt me, what, 3 times?, and I still stuck with you
What did I do to deserve this?
I'm still so young, so young, but full of love to give.
I promised that I would stick with you, through the thick and thin, and now, my best friend is telling me otherwise.
Tell me what I did to deserve this?
I really love you
I don't wanna say goodbye
I cried so much
I stayed up all night overthinking
Tell me what I did to deserve this?
I hope your happy
Your finally broke me.
But you wanna know something?
I am still gonna be here for you, through the thick and thin
I will always love you
Tell me what I did to deserve this?

Thoughts on this. Please

Answer 1

Looks good sis great job

Answer 2

Shii I love this You are always there for someone else just know I'm here for you Though The bad the good the middle I got you Sis Love you 💕 Stay Strong you going to make it

Answer 3

that is soo good i love it

Answer 4

wow have u been in so much pain by your girl friend

Answer 5

I love this so much- amazing. Truly and utterly amazing.

Answer 6

This is really good! you should keep it up!

Answer 7

And who sent u that cause like they must be crazy I nearly know u and I think that ur a great person

Answer 8

This is really good you have a talent in mind keep it up and it might become your future you never know!

Answer 9

Pressureeeeeeeeeee

Answer 10

Really good!

Answer 11

This is a great piece and it delivers the message that out of everything we've been through you still hurt me. I loved you and maybe still do, but you just ripped my heart out and crushed it. I've never felt more emotion in a poem than when I read this. This is absolutely amazing. Great Work and have an amazing day. < 3

Answer 12

it is great please keep up with the great work, i love to see and read more <3 :)

Answer 13

Wow..I'm lost for words, this is amazing! I think you did wonderful, keep up the amazing work. And I mean it, it's amazing! <333

Answer 14

You remind me of someone..

Answer 15

ITS SO GOOD DOLPHIN I LOVE THIS especially the "I'm still so young, so young, but full of love to give. I promised that I would stick with you, through the thick and thin¨ part, its rlly good, hope ur feeling better 😭

Answer 16

It's good, Good job girly

Answer 17

This is really good, Good job, Keep it up!

Answer 18

Thank you all so much. It really does mean the world

Answer 19

Great Job. I hope whoever hurt you, treats you better next time.

Answer 20

I totally Agree. Just by you writing this, shows a big step. Your powerful. You got this I know you do <33

Answer 21

Stay Positive, No matter what happens. We all love you!!

Answer 22

I agree with everyone. Your strong. I believe in you.
This writing, is amazing. Keep up the great work!!

Answer 23

Aww. Thank you all, this means a lot to me.

Answer 24

Im going through the same thing and im very hurt idk what to do can someone please help me

Answer 25

I recently had a break up but i still love her she replaced me with someone else but i still love her idk if i should keep loving her or move on

Answer 26

But if you ever need someone to talk to just ask someone will be happy to help you through it

Answer 27

dang this relatable no kap

Answer 28

It certainly does send a very strong message that more people should hear and take into consideration