Living in Darkness All my life Clinging To the prayers that was sent Trying not to Lose Another friend But Just being me is the worst thing I try my hardest but It's like I'm Dying I cry every night Looking at the Wall Relieving The pain He cause everyday and night. i trust that I'll be ok but I'm Close to ending it all And Hope it was for the best

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Renne · Answer

The emotion is there and so is the reality of it but I feel you can do better with your punctuation and maybe go further. Other than that, I feel that you did an amazing job.

laylasnii13 · Answer

@renne wrote:

The emotion is there and so is the reality of it but I feel you can do better with your punctuation and maybe go further. Other than that, I feel that you did an amazing job.

Thx

Renne · Answer

Of course.