" Go ahead, Mom, say it, say what u want to say" She looks at me with an unreadable face then walks back to the car and I turn back towards the house this is going to be the worst year of my life," your dad says they've landed and they'll be here by sunrise," my mom says as she walks back towards where I'm standing " "cool yeah...whatever " she looks at me with saddened eyes " look Maggie i-I'm sorry about what I said i- I know what he did to you and I'm sorry it's just i- " you want to keep this pretend family together mom just say it, you want me to stay with you after he touched me like it never happened " she looks like she's about to say something but decides against it and I would prefer it that way because I don't have the strength for this mentally. We wait outside the house for hours until they actually pull up to the house they get out of the car and Jim looks at me and mom with no expression and I look at my step sisters and they are quiet too but they look like they've been crying but I ignore it they probably cried when dad didn't get them the food they wanted... their such brats the only problem they have to go through is.. none they have no problems at all dad buys them whatever they want and treats me like an ally cat that just wandered in. They look in my direction and I look away as they start walking towards Mom and me "Did you see the inside yet Mindy " Jim says to my mom "Ah no Honey I-I thought I would wait on you so we could see it together" he looks at me for a moment and I feel like throwing up, he looks back to my mom " yeah that's great let's go check it out yeah". they walk into the house and I just stand there on the porch feeling tears well up in my throat. I walk and sit on the porch and decide to let them fall
(part two guys ) tell me what you think

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" Go ahead, Mom, say it, say what u want to say" She looks at me with an unreadable face then walks back to the car and I turn back towards the house this is going to be the worst year of my life," your dad says they've landed and they'll be here by sunrise," my mom says as she walks back towards where I'm standing " "cool yeah...whatever " she looks at me with saddened eyes " look Maggie i-I'm sorry about what I said i- I know what he did to you and I'm sorry it's just i- " you want to keep this pretend family together mom just say it, you want me to stay with you after he touched me like it never happened " she looks like she's about to say something but decides against it and I would prefer it that way because I don't have the strength for this mentally. We wait outside the house for hours until they actually pull up to the house they get out of the car and Jim looks at me and mom with no expression and I look at my step sisters and they are quiet too but they look like they've been crying but I ignore it they probably cried when dad didn't get them the food they wanted... their such brats the only problem they have to go through is.. none they have no problems at all dad buys them whatever they want and treats me like an ally cat that just wandered in. They look in my direction and I look away as they start walking towards Mom and me "Did you see the inside yet Mindy " Jim says to my mom "Ah no Honey I-I thought I would wait on you so we could see it together" he looks at me for a moment and I feel like throwing up, he looks back to my mom " yeah that's great let's go check it out yeah". they walk into the house and I just stand there on the porch feeling tears well up in my throat. I walk and sit on the porch and decide to let them fall 
  (part two guys ) tell me what you think

nilahisthebest · Answer

MMMKK

laylasnii13 · Answer

Absolute Love💕

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@laylasnii13 wrote:

Absolute Love💕

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laylasnii13 · Answer

@nilahisthebest wrote:

@laylasnii13 wrote:

Absolute Love💕

fr

ye It has so much meaning to it I just...

nilahisthebest · Answer

@laylasnii13 wrote:

@nilahisthebest wrote:

@laylasnii13 wrote:

Absolute Love💕

fr

ye It has so much meaning to it I just...

ye i love it

OLIVER69 · Answer

I really do like this story. You have a knack for writing and creating such an amazing piece. I can't wait to look forward to part two. Keep up the fabulous work. < 3

nilahisthebest · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

I really do like this story. You have a knack for writing and creating such an amazing piece. I can't wait to look forward to part two. Keep up the fabulous work. < 3

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imyurdad009 · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

I really do like this story. You have a knack for writing and creating such an amazing piece. I can't wait to look forward to part two. Keep up the fabulous work. < 3

this is part two part one is in closed post u can find it

OLIVER69 · Answer

@imyurdad009 wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

I really do like this story. You have a knack for writing and creating such an amazing piece. I can't wait to look forward to part two. Keep up the fabulous work. < 3

this is part two part one is in closed post u can find it

right then... I will look forward to more... if you choose to right more.

imyurdad009 · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

@imyurdad009 wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

I really do like this story. You have a knack for writing and creating such an amazing piece. I can't wait to look forward to part two. Keep up the fabulous work. < 3

this is part two part one is in closed post u can find it

right then... I will look forward to more... if you choose to right more.

ofc

Lars · Answer

Nice !!

chuckthedonut · Answer

Cooool !! <3