Question

Opinions of my poem I thought of in 5 min:
Live love life.
Show no mercy, show no lie
I come to show you my greatest power
But sadly I can’t this hour.
For you my friend, are dismissed,
With my greatest involvement of your true kiss.
Nor will last me forever
Forever in peace
But show me your heart
And I will compete.
But now inhave failed
To love you the most
Please forgive myself my dear
I am now the host.
Host of my wonders
Host of your lies,
If only you loved me
But it was all just a lie

Answer 1

👎 lol

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Other people need to know my fantastic work

Answer 3

This doesnt seem like much of a poem but it looks like one n i get where u going with it but good job

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Wooooow

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Thanks Aiden….

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It is a poem

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My fantastic work for only 5 min of brain time

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i think i should get a medal for responding first

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and for giving you a medal

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Love you guys

Answer 11

its the best poem

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Ty Jack

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Giving you a medal cuz I like u n ur fun

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You took mine away

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no

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see

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On the other post

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there

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Yw

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ty