Question

Finished Chapter 9 of my story "Love is Forbidden"

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Answer 1

I open my eyes as I look around. No one is around me. I smell some bacon and eggs. I get up very slowly and walk to the bathroom. I get in the shower and sit there with my legs close to my chest. The blood was off my face but I was still crying. I sat in the shower for a good hour before I stood up and washed off. After about another hour I got out and put on some clothes as I stumbled down the stairs to the dining room. I sat at the table as all three guys kissed my head and gave me a plate. They all had something different on the plates they gave me. It was as if I chose what plate of food I ate, I would be choosing what guy I loved more. Jeremy's plate had pancakes and sausages. Liam's plate had twelve French toast sticks with blueberries. Then Axton's plate had eggs and bacon with oranges. They all had a glass of milk with their plates. I wanted Axton's plate because I love oranges. So as I reached out for an orange their faces were disappointed, well except for Axton whose face was a little confused. He just said, "Well enjoy your food handsome." I smiled slightly and stumbled over my words as I said, "You always knew my favorite fruit was oranges." I ate the food Axton prepared very slowly. I knew that Caleb was already off to school. It was an alright morning.

As I was getting out of the chair, I slipped and fell. Liam was the first to rush over and help me up. I stood up and looked at the floor. "It's a little slippery." Liam giggled a little as I stood up fully on my own. I walked to the couch and sat down. I laid my head on the armrest of the couch as we all watched Wall-e. It is such a good movie that I fell asleep. When I woke up again, I saw a note on the coffee table with some jean shorts and a lavender shirt. I opened the note and it read, "Liam and Jeremy had to go to work, but meet me at this location for a good time." I smiled as I put on the clothes. I locked up the house as I walked to the location Axton gave me. As I arrived I saw Axton standing outside a gay bar. I smiled and ran up to hug him. He knew that I would be happy and safe here. We walked in there together holding hands and so many people came up to us. We had a great time. I even met a fierce girl. We had a few shots together, spilled a few secrets and when we talked figured out that she went through something similar. We had a great time and I introduced her to Axton too. I found her name was Brylie. It was very unique and I liked it. We exchanged phone numbers and then Axton and I left. By the time we did leave, it was around two in the morning. It was one of the greatest nights of my life and it was all thanks to Axton.

We walked home together and when we got home, Jeremy and Liam were up waiting for us. They didn't look too mad, just worried. They were happy when they saw us. They came up to us and hugged both me and Axton. We all walked in, sat down on the couch and we laid down. Caleb laid across all of us as we all fell asleep. As the next morning Caleb and I woke up at the same time. We smiled a little and giggled too. We both got up and let the other guys sleep. It was Saturday so no one had work or school. I wrote a note and put it on the table. Caleb and I wanted to go to the park, so we did. We started walking to the park and I put Caleb on my shoulders because he hated walking. When we got to the park, as soon as I put him down he was so happy and right towards the slides. He made friends so quickly with the other kids. I was happy for him. He was having so much fun that he wanted to invite his friend to come and get ice cream with us. I didn't mind so I went up and talked with the boy's mom. She was okay with it as long as she came with. And with that, we all went to get ice cream. We all got different flavors and we ate it whilst walking to our house. We invited them in with us. Jeremy and Axton introduced themselves to the mom, Kyndel. When I looked at Liam to introduce himself he looked a little pale. And it was when Kyndel's son said, "Daddy", that I understood. I wouldn't be mad that Liam had dated Kyndel but the fact that he had a son kind of shot me in the heart.

He was over here a lot which means he was never at his own home with his son and wife. Yep, he was married. I saw the ring on her finger, then looked at his and saw the ring as well. I was hurt a little. So I just said, "Okay, Liam, Kyndel, and your adorable son can leave now". She understood and took her son's hand and walked out. As Liam was walking out he was about to say something when both Axton and Jeremy stepped in front of him, getting him out. As soon as he was gone I've never felt happier. I loved Jeremy and Axton so much. I barely knew Liam so it was fine that he was gone. Plus Axton is pretty much Caleb's father at this point and I love him oh so very much. Jeremy is extremely special to me. So I think I will be happy with these two and Caleb. I picked up Caleb and sat him down at the table, It was time for dinner so I made lasagna for everyone. We all sat around the table and dug in. Caleb was a little messy so I gave him a bath. A little while after the bath, I put him in a onesie and laid him down in the bed. He was sweet laying in the bed. Axton also came in and gave him a kiss. Then we both walked out and we laid together with Jeremy in a king-size bed. We all slept very calmly and peacefully.

Answer 2

I didn't read it all but what I have so far is really good job

Answer 3

Omg okay not just saying this because you are my bsf buttttt, but This is like literally amazing the character development the scene the instant hook and oh my gosh I love it WHERE IS CHAPTER 10?!!

Answer 4

I wanna read it first! @oliver69 -.- or we fight

Answer 5

Thank you both so much and don't worry chapter 10 is coming and I'll let you read chapter 10 first @renne if that makes you happy. I'm really glad you like it. < 3

Answer 6

Yayyy Thanks!!

Answer 7

you gonna become a famous author

Answer 8

This is truly amazing. Never give up. I mean it

Answer 9

i love it!!!

Answer 10

Love it

Answer 11

This is literally amazing. The character development, scene, hook oh my gosh I have to read the whole chapter.