Tossing and Turning

Tossing and turning
Unable to sleep.
While others happily live their lives
All I seem to do is weep.
Nobody understands;
Nobody can see
The person I am
Is not really me.
Would they like me?
Would they care?
If they knew
The weird thoughts inside my head
Imagining the world if I was dead.

(tell me what you think)

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Tossing and Turning

Tossing and turning
Unable to sleep.
While others happily live their lives
All I seem to do is weep.
Nobody understands;
Nobody can see
The person I am
Is not really me.
Would they like me?
Would they care?
If they knew
The weird thoughts inside my head
Imagining the world if I was dead.

(tell me what you think)

valkraybff · Answer

I can relate it amazing 10 out of 10

Treyvonski · Answer

L ratio poem fr

Treyvonski · Answer

Like very much below mid

Treyvonski · Answer

No disrespect

ElexusQuimby · Answer

This is awesome.  Keep it up.  I love it.

valkraybff · Answer

it amazing I love it keep it up

bravosix · Answer

its absolutly amazing i love it

OLIVER69 · Answer

why thank you guys and girls so much. This means a lot for what I've been going through. ✌️

Renne · Answer

I understand what you feeling. That feeling of making others happy while trying to help yourself but nones helping YOU no one sees the help YOU need.

OLIVER69 · Answer

@renne wrote:

I understand what you feeling. That feeling of making others happy while trying to help yourself but nones helping YOU no one sees the help YOU need.

yeah exactly