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Renne:

In the art of understanding, There lies a great reward, For when we truly empathize, Our hearts become restored. To see the world through others' eyes, And feel their joys and pains, Is to connect on a deeper level, And break down walls and chains. For every person has a story, A unique and sacred tale, And when we take the time to listen, Their inner world we unveil. So let us strive for understanding, And let compassion reign, For in this way, we'll build a world, Where love and peace sustain.

doggofroyo:

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doggofroyo:

Ohhh is this a poem

doggofroyo:

To see the world through others' eyes, And feel their joys and pains, Is to connect on a deeper level, And break down walls and chains. I luv this line. < 3

Renne:

Thank you for your feedback.

doggofroyo:

So let us strive for understanding, And let compassion reign, For in this way, we'll build a world, Where love and peace sustain. I felt this in my soul OuO

doggofroyo:

Good Job fr fr :D

Renne:

Thank you so much.

MidniteSunny:

As they say, perspective ish everything. lovely job<3

Renne:

Oh my God-! I actually did everything right this time?! @midnitesunny

MidniteSunny:

@renne wrote:
Oh my God-! I actually did everything right this time?! @midnitesunny
O lookit chu throwing shade to ze person who would critique ur poems and btw chu never replied to those. How come ? I had only ze best intentions yk. Don't b petty bloss. I still said ur writing pieces were gud, didn't I ? I merely kept in mind dat dis ish a learning platform and gav mah two cents. Chu hav gotten much better from ze first ones I've seen. Gud job.

Renne:

@midnitesunny wrote:
@renne wrote:
Oh my God-! I actually did everything right this time?! @midnitesunny
O lookit chu throwing shade to ze person who would critique ur poems and btw chu never replied to those. How come ? I had only ze best intentions yk. Don't b petty bloss. I still said ur writing pieces were gud, didn't I ? I merely kept in mind dat dis ish a learning platform and gav mah two cents. Chu hav gotten much better from ze first ones I've seen. Gud job.
No- I was asking was there anything I needed to fix I was happy because I thought maybe since I had taken your advice I had done the poem right- I wasn't trying to be rude because in honesty I was just asking-.

MidniteSunny:

Sowwy bout dat, attacks r common. But yeh chu just did gud, yk. Kudos to olivia for tellin us to check it out lol

ddog:

Good job it's deep

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