Question

"Dad alright can you let me go now we've been hugging like this for twenty minutes" he squeezes me tighter "Just let me have this you're going to be gone and I won't be able to hug you like this " I smile " but dad you're going to make me late" he breaks the hug and holds me so that he can look at me
"I'm going to miss you sweetie" I look at him "Dad the school is like 20 minutes from here calm down" "Yeah I know but you know your going to be gone for a long time and I'm going to miss you" I laugh and walk towards my car I look back at my dad and he pretends like he can't even stand "bye dad see you in a few hours" I get in my car and sigh god he is so dramatic I put my seatbelt on and drive away. I pull up to the schools parking lot 10 minutes earlier because I wanted to get a good spot and I hop out of the car i look at the school and smile "This year is going to be different" ( what do u guys think)

Answer 1

That's good

Answer 2

Nice

Answer 3

Nice work so far !!