Can y'all help with my poem?

Don't hide yourself away
For the world to never see
Just let your colors sway
And show who you truly be

With each step you take
Let your confidence shine through
Never let yourself break
For authenticity is true

Your voice, your style, your grace
It's all unique to you
So don't let others replace
The special traits that shine through

Be proud of who you are
And the path that you're on
For the world will see from far
The beauty that you have won

So, spread your wings and fly
With boldness in each step
And never be afraid to try
For true happiness is kept

In being your authentic self
And never hiding what's inside
For that's where true joy dwells
And where your beauty can abide

Question

Can y'all help with my poem?

Don't hide yourself away 
For the world to never see 
Just let your colors sway 
And show who you truly be

With each step you take 
Let your confidence shine through 
Never let yourself break 
For authenticity is true

Your voice, your style, your grace 
It's all unique to you 
So don't let others replace 
The special traits that shine through

Be proud of who you are 
And the path that you're on 
For the world will see from far 
The beauty that you have won

So, spread your wings and fly 
With boldness in each step 
And never be afraid to try 
For true happiness is kept

In being your authentic self 
And never hiding what's inside 
For that's where true joy dwells  
And where your beauty can abide

MidniteSunny · Answer

wut exactly ish it dat chu need help w/ on dis ? it sounds gud to me as far as i can tell

Renne · Answer

What would you like help with? I don't see any mistakes it sounds good.

Dolphan · Answer

This is amazing, I don't see why you need help on a beautiful poem like this. Great Job, Never Give Up.

PRANKER · Answer

u can only help yourself

Sandy99 · Answer

This is amazing, keep up with your great work