Ask your own question, for FREE!
English 6 Online
Renne:

The melody of love is sweet, A symphony that can't be beaten. Two hearts in perfect harmony, Creating music for eternity. The notes they play are soft and true, A duet that's meant for me and you. With every chord, our love grows strong, A beautiful ballad all day long. The harmony we share is rare, A gift that we both love to share. Our Love is like a perfect song, Forever playing, forever strong. So let us dance to our own beat, A musical love that can't be beaten. Together we'll create a melody, A beautiful song for all to see.

HawksDaughet8732:

This is a beautiful poem!

Renne:

Thank you! Any suggestions on what i should write a poem about next?

rocfp:

Omg the ¨Two hearts in perfect harmony, Creating music for eternity.¨ I LOVE THATT OML

rocfp:

@renne wrote:
Thank you! Any suggestions on what I should write a poem about next?
Maybe something about you? But relate it to yourself. Like what does your life feel like, like compare it to something maybe? Or why it makes you feel a certain way. Just a idea :D

chuckthedonut:

Wow, this is really beautiful. I love the words you used in this poem !! It's really good, I suggest maybe you could do a poem about the world? Idk lol. But amazing job !! :D @lars loooook !!

Lars:

Your writing is really strong. Nice work !! Some suggestions are: something related to nature- maybe a season?, A specific color and how it makes you feel/how you relate to it, or you could write a poem more horror themed?

Renne:

@lars wrote:
Your writing is really strong. Nice work !! Some suggestions are: something related to nature- maybe a season?, A specific color and how it makes you feel/how you relate to it, or you could write a poem more horror themed?
Okay is there a specific season?

Renne:

@chuckthedonut wrote:
Wow, this is really beautiful. I love the words you used in this poem !! It's really good, I suggest maybe you could do a poem about the world? Idk lol. But amazing job !! :D @lars loooook !!
Okay I will! When I do I will @ you

Renne:

@rocfp wrote:
@renne wrote:
Thank you! Any suggestions on what I should write a poem about next?
Maybe something about you? But relate it to yourself. Like what does your life feel like, like compare it to something maybe? Or why it makes you feel a certain way. Just a idea :D
Hmm what about me?

Lars:

@renne wrote:
@lars wrote:
Your writing is really strong. Nice work !! Some suggestions are: something related to nature- maybe a season?, A specific color and how it makes you feel/how you relate to it, or you could write a poem more horror themed?
Okay is there a specific season?
Maybe fall?

Luigi0210:

good poem (:

Renne:

@luigi0210 wrote:
good poem (:
Thanks^^

Renne:

@lars wrote:
@renne wrote:
@lars wrote:
Your writing is really strong. Nice work !! Some suggestions are: something related to nature- maybe a season?, A specific color and how it makes you feel/how you relate to it, or you could write a poem more horror themed?
Okay is there a specific season?
Maybe fall?
Got it

laylasnii13:

Beautiful

Renne:

Thank you

Renne:

@lars @chuckthedonut I am about to get started

Can't find your answer? Make a FREE account and ask your own questions, OR help others and earn volunteer hours!

Join our real-time social learning platform and learn together with your friends!
Can't find your answer? Make a FREE account and ask your own questions, OR help others and earn volunteer hours!

Join our real-time social learning platform and learn together with your friends!