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https://www.wattpad.com/user/ArieOnna_Palmen17 i made a new book let me know what u think and if i should add a new part

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Dang it it's blocked

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o let me type out the words for the people who cant get in the site

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It was the week before before school ends everyone was exotic that school is over everyone was planning their Summer out Just wondering what they will be doing They were exited that School is out and the Fun begins and that they graduate school next year decided what to do for there Summer and what Friends they will hang out with or what they will be doing and rather they go Fishing or Camping It was a tough Decision to make everyone was so Exited to leave school but have to say goodbye to the friend they wont see in the Summer cause some kids are going on vacation and won't we back until the beginning of 12th grade year every one was packing there supplies up and getting ready to clean the Classroom like they do every year and then all of a sudden the teacher Mrs. Callie came out exited telling the Students to stand up that they were all going to play a game do to Students r leaving for vacation for the Summer she wants to play a game to say goodbye so everyone did and they had a blast laughing and joking it was like they were kids again After the game the school bell rang 1 hour later they grabbed their bags and left for the Epic adventure

After the School bell rang the Students ran out of school as fast as a Gingerbread laughing talking about there Summer wondering what adventure they will be doing then Next thing we know the to Siblings but were also pranksters Olivia and Aaron came out and started talking the Katy and Cathrine about Rumors about a Monster In the Forest of course they were trying to scare their friends but katie and Cathrine didn't believe them cause of course they didn't believe no monsters and thought they didn't exist they only appear and fairy tales they just started to tell Olivia and Aaron that Monsters Don't Exist and saying they r not falling for their tricks again and that they want this summer to be the best summer yet not where the get pranks by the Twins all Summer long they didn't want to be pranked 24/7 that wold rune that Summer totally Everyone knows there's so Such thing as "MONSTERS"

the four friends started packing their bags the next morning and headed off for their Camping trip next thing you know Katie ask if its necessary to being the twins Olivia and Aaron due to their pranking they did not want a Summer of pranks they drove to a Camping spot then all of a Sudden Olivia says "that's the spot the Monster was last seen in the forest" of course the Friends Katie and Cathrine didn't believe no such thing as monsters so they instantly ignored them so they started unpacking their Products they took with them and started putting up their Tents and then the two Twins Aaron and Olivia goes wondering in the forest to gather some rocks and sticks so they can start a fire to get warmed up and Roast some Smores all of a Sudden Olivia and Aaron walks straight into a Cave but it was not a Bear Cave either this gave had Blood Everywhere and human Bones and Big claw Marks and then they had it the Rumar was true what the Twins made up was not a lie their they had it all the pictures and then A huge Dragon came and then the 2 Twins "SCREAMED" across the forest that's when the friends Cathrine and Katie heard the scream it sounded serious but they thought they are good actors so maybe their trying to scare us so they waited one hole hour no signs up the Twins then they thought "could it be could it be that the Rumor is True did the Monster take the Twins" so the two friends went out in the Mid Open Forest to find their friends

the two friends searched High and Low for the Twins wondering Where they are they searched nearly everywhere is the forest becoming as scared as u can think then they remembered they had a phone to call just encase their was a Emergency so they called (the cops - 911) the Cops came as soon as they could they asked where they last were and what the Twins looked like the cops said "not to worry your friends will be found soon" so they calmed down for a bit and could not just let the Twins be out their alone so the left their camping spot again to search As high and low as they could then their legs got tired they sat down praying to the Lord hoping the friends get found soon they have wondered many times where they gave gone what happened was the Rumor true did this Monster take the Twins they thought it over and over again then 1 hour later the cops came back with bad but also shocking news they did not find the Twins but they Ran into a Dragon the two friends were shocked a Dragon how can it be

the cops said that due to a Dragon in the Forest they need to close the forest until the exterminators take it out but the tow friends didn't want to leave the forest their friends was in their then the cops said Said "due to a Fire Breathing dragon in the forest i am sure they are dead no one can ever live against a Dragon so they are log long" they friends didn't believe that wishing they had believed the Twins in the first place they were so upset they didn't know what to do how will they go to 12th grade next year without their friend they knew since pre-school how will the start their left without them? what will they do? were all questions popping into their heads as they got scared and worried as the Cops brought them out of the forest safely and called the exterminators to find the Dragon and kill it they said "the dragon is not gonna kill no more people we will end the Dragons Life no more killing for this Dragon" then the two friends Katie and Catherine thought "they have to be alive we need to keep looking this don't make since they are so called Dead but no bodies found" so they secretly went into the Forest with out the Cops knowing.

Luckly Katie have stolen a MAP that leads to the Cave so they followed the Map to the cave and found it they found Aaron and Olivia back pack so they must of went here the cage is "HUGE" thought Katie its "Enormous" thought Catherine they looked up stairs and down stairs for them no Sign of of "where are they" thought Katie they was soon to believe they were dead until they heard a Random Noise it sounded like Rawr noise to them for some reason then they got scare what if they are next will be eaten then all od a sudden they see Aaron and Olivia they were happy and shocked they told them what the cops said about a Dragon in the Forest and that their was no chance of them living then the Twins laughed and said no the Dragon is not harmless they discovered the Dragon was the Twins Mother and that they discovered that they were part Dragon they were just learning how to be a Dragon the two friends Catherine and Katie were shocked then the Cops also were secretly following the two friends and listening to them talk they were as shocked as you think they were so they told the exterminators to leave and that the Crime was solved they also found out that the Dragon is also a huge help and helps people out with things they four friends was so happy to be back together

THE END OR IS IT THE END?

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@renne

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Thank you so much!

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this is- wow-!

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This is better than mine-!

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I love it and I love how you distinguish each paragraph. Some writes barely distinguish paragraphs and it gets hard and not fun to read. I read it on Wattpad and I loved it. I love that you have let off some parts at the end to make the reader, move to the next part to see what happens. Good Job and keep up the good work. Have a Noice Day. < 3

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this is amazing

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That is really good!

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Wow this is amazing i really like the way you write it is impressive. Definitely can see you as a future author.

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yeah no problem

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Wow that's awesome! Keep up the good work.

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It looks like my comment didn't add earlier- What I said earlier was this looks very cool and interesting !! Nice work !! @lars

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Great job on this Arieonna !!