Question

Oh the days of the summer sun
When the sea waves used to laugh, and the children would run
When the beach would be so full, and the sand so ever warm
We feel different, away from the norm
We build castles, collect seashells
While they splash in the water, they hear the whales
The sun tans out pale skins, and we feel so tames but yet so free
Those fun summer times are where I long to be
But when the night tumbles,
the warm air turns cold
We hear tales of whisper, tales of the untold
The lies spread like wildfire,
breaking humanity, and trust
Our old fun summer times, now into dust
I guess our lesson is learned
The real truth is what we have always yearned
For the old summer times, have only brought us lies
And will break are big hearts, and leave us empty with cries.

Answer 1

is this a poem or an writing assignment because it good

Answer 2

still good

Answer 3

My lord this is good, I swear I could smell the water/sea/pool when I was reading this. This is forever a good poem. It has such great unique writing to this. I love it so much and I hope you continue to write more. Have a nice day. < 3