(Been working on this for a while @oliver69 @chuckthedonut @chigagad )

Words can harm, they cut like a knife,
Leaving scars that may last a lifetime.
Bullying is not a game, it's not alright,
It's time for us to stand up and fight.

We must stop the taunts and the cruel jabs,
For no one deserves to feel like they're trash.
Let's spread love and kindness instead,
And make sure everyone feels safe in their bed.

It's up to us to break the cycle,
To be the ones who lead by example.
Let's show that respect and empathy,
Are the true keys to humanity.

So let's come together, hand in hand,
And make sure bullying has no stand.
For when we unite and stand up tall,
We can create a world where kindness is all.

Question

(Been working on this for a while @oliver69 @chuckthedonut @chigagad )

Words can harm, they cut like a knife,
Leaving scars that may last a lifetime.
Bullying is not a game, it's not alright,
It's time for us to stand up and fight.

We must stop the taunts and the cruel jabs,
For no one deserves to feel like they're trash.
Let's spread love and kindness instead,
And make sure everyone feels safe in their bed.

It's up to us to break the cycle,
To be the ones who lead by example.
Let's show that respect and empathy,
Are the true keys to humanity.

So let's come together, hand in hand,
And make sure bullying has no stand.
For when we unite and stand up tall,
We can create a world where kindness is all.

Renne · Answer

@notleiland *

NotLeiland · Answer

I really like the message this poem sends about how violence and bullying need to stop. Good job!

DsneadBeats · Answer

the goat 🦾

Renne · Answer

@notleiland wrote:

I really like the message this poem sends about how violence and bullying need to stop. Good job!

Thank you!

OLIVER69 · Answer

Again I love this poem. And I will stand up and fight against bullying and harsh words because like the message I got from the poem was that no one should be put down. I absolutely love it. Keep up the good work and I love you bsf. < 3

Renne · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

Again I love this poem. And I will stand up and fight against bullying and harsh words because like the message I got from the poem was that no one should be put down. I absolutely love it. Keep up the good work and I love you bsf. < 3

THANKS BSFFFFFFFFFF

Renne · Answer

@oliver69 teach me your ways

Arieonna · Answer

OMG that is so darn good i love that so much  every thing u write has a powerful meaning to them teach me hw u do it

Renne · Answer

@arieonna wrote:

OMG that is so darn good i love that so much every thing u write has a powerful meaning to them teach me hw u do it

ask oliver!! it's not meee

OLIVER69 · Answer

@renne wrote:

@oliver69 teach me your ways

My ways are secret but I may teach you if you really want to know lol :p ^^

Renne · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

@renne wrote:

@oliver69 teach me your ways

My ways are secret but I may teach you if you really want to know lol :p ^^

YES_!

rocfp · Answer

I love it :D It's a sign to stand up against bullying and the things people say. As long as you know your worth you shouldn't have to care about what people say, do, and think.  Your own opinion is the only thing that matters because it's YOUR life and not others, live is at you want! I LOVE ITTTTTT!! Keep up the good work!

Renne · Answer

BOOM! YES!

@rocfp wrote:

I love it :D It's a sign to stand up against bullying and the things people say. As long as you know your worth you shouldn't have to care about what people say, do, and think. Your own opinion is the only thing that matters because it's YOUR life and not others, live is at you want! I LOVE ITTTTTT!! Keep up the good work!

Lionblaze18 · Answer

very good :)

Renne · Answer

Thank you

nyasiah · Answer

good

rthrth · Answer

This is amazing

Charliemfs1321 · Answer

amazing a s f

Renne · Answer

thank you all lol

Renne · Answer

Any suggestions?

Charliemfs1321 · Answer

no ty

rocfp · Answer

IMMA MAKE ONE LIKE YOURS AND I WANT U TO READ ITTTTT

Renne · Answer

Oh-! Are you sure-? I mean i love your writing style in honesty!

Renne · Answer

Does anyone have any suggestions on what I should write next-??

Renne · Answer

I need fresh ideas

Charliemfs1321 · Answer

Words can harm, they cut like a knife. Ik how the knife feels

Renne · Answer

I am sorry..

Charliemfs1321 · Answer

don't be

Renne · Answer

I really should have thought how some of the words in the poems would effect others

Charliemfs1321 · Answer

It's not that bad after you take the knife out and let the blood gush out

Renne · Answer

...

Charliemfs1321 · Answer

what?

@renne wrote:

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Dolphan · Answer

this is umm, powerful

Renne · Answer

I apologize if any of my poems or the words I've chosen have had a negative impact on you. Please forgive me as I did not consider this beforehand. If any of my work has offended you, please let me know. I genuinely regret any harm caused.

Charliemfs1321 · Answer

nothing about this is offending

@renne wrote:

I apologize if any of my poems or the words I've chosen have had a negative impact on you. Please forgive me as I did not consider this beforehand. If any of my work has offended you, please let me know. I genuinely regret any harm caused.

Renne · Answer

Are you sure-? I didn't consider this before posting-..

Renne · Answer

I apologize for the inconvenience. I will now end this post and make the necessary corrections to my other poem before sharing it. It will be posted shortly.

Renne · Answer

It is now posted..

chuckthedonut · Answer

And yet this also sounds amazing. All of the things you write are always amazing !! What inspires you to write all of these poems?? Great job !! Keep it up !! <3333