Question

As I lay beneath the starry sky,
The fragrance of flowers filled the air,
A night so beautiful, I can't deny,
Love was all around, everywhere.

The moon shone bright, a silver light,
Dancing on the leaves of trees,
A peaceful calm, a wondrous sight,
The night was filled with the sweetest breeze.

The scent of love, so sweet and pure,
Filled my heart with joy and peace,
A night so magical, I am sure,
The essence of love will never cease.

I closed my eyes, and took a breath,
The smell of flowers filled my soul,
A night so beautiful, I felt blessed,
Love, the only thing that made me whole.

This night will stay with me forever,
A memory, so cherished and dear,
The smell of flowers, the air so clever,
Love, the only thing that I hold near.

Answer 1

I love this a lot^^. It's very sweet and sincere

Answer 2

Thank youuuu<333

Answer 3

Ofcc<333

Answer 4

@dolphan @arieonna @oliver69 @lars @chuckthedonut Anything i need to improve?

Answer 5

Actually, I don't see anything that needs fixing. I think it is perfect just the way it is. Although, with some of your poems I don't see a title/name for it. So what would be the name for this one? I love it though and keep up the good work. < 3

Answer 6

Beyond the stars i think