Question

I can't breathe, everyone's watching
As the world bears witness to my pain
My soul cries out in desperation
As I struggle to breathe and sustain

I'm suffocating in this existence
Trapped by a system that holds me down
My voice is silenced by oppression
As the weight of injustice bears down

But I will not be silenced forever
My spirit will rise and break free
And though it may take time and struggle
I will breathe and begin to live again, you'll see

For I am more than just a victim
I am a powerful force, unchained
And together we will fight for justice
Until a new world is born, unashamed.

(Wrote another poem named "Anxiety" which is why it's in health because Anxiety is a disorder)

Answer 1

Anxiety is in fact a mental health disorder, but this is a poem so the topic should be in writing. This poem more than likely represents a panic attack, it's amazing as much as it is scary sobrino <3

Answer 2

Oh I can totally relate to the poem I love it 👌

Answer 3

same! its amazing gj dad!! keep working as hard as ya can!

Answer 4

Anxiety and depression is how that happens to me

Answer 5

Thank you guys so much, this poem took a lot out of me to write, also I know it's supposed to be in writing but I already have a post open in there. love ya guys < 3

Answer 6

I love it. I can relate and I love how you word your poems. They are generous and they instantly state you're meaning.