Question

So I am addicted to writing poems now.

"Murder"

How happy is the unspeakable crime!
Are you upset by how sacred it is?
Does it tear you apart to see the crime so atrocious?

A murderess, however hard he tries,
Will always be ruthless.
A murderess is merciless. a murderess is remorseless,
a murderess is unpitying, however.

I saw the little organic phenomenon of my generation destroyed,
How I mourned the death.
Down, down, down into the darkness of death,
Gently it goes - the short, the littler, the lilliputian.

Miscarriages are, in their way, deliberate accidents of abortion.
Are you upset by how heavyset they are?
Does it tear you apart to see the miscarriage so fat-free?

Suicide, however hard they try,
Will always be a homicide.
Does suicide make you shiver?
do they?

How happy is the notorious perjury!
Does the perjury make you shiver?
does it?

Answer 1

W-wow 0.0 outstanding 0.0 your better than me-!

Answer 2

Amazing! All of your poems are so good👌

Answer 3

Thank you, guys, so much... I'm really enjoying writing poems. < 3

Answer 4

Ofc! I can tell lol

Answer 5

And yet this one is amazing too. All of them are. You put lot's of effort into this. You did great !! <3