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Lars:

How can the stars still shine in the dark? How come the world isnt falling apart? Why are you slowly fading away from me? How could this happen? How could this be? How is the world not frozen in place? A moment captured, now erased.

CutieKittyGirl539:

Stars and paint and glowing plastic beads glow from phosphorescence. This is a photoluminescent process in which a material absorbs energy and then slowly releases it in the form of visible light. which this is called Phosphorescence. What I'm tryin to say is the sun is the one lighting the stars in the dark!

CutieKittyGirl539:

Love your pfp back lars

Lars:

@cutiekittygirl539 wrote:
Stars and paint and glowing plastic beads glow from phosphorescence. This is a photoluminescent process in which a material absorbs energy and then slowly releases it in the form of visible light. which this is called Phosphorescence. What I'm tryin to say is the sun is the one lighting the stars in the dark!
Oh this is a poem lol not a question. If you perceived it as a question I mean.

CutieKittyGirl539:

@lars wrote:
@cutiekittygirl539 wrote:
Stars and paint and glowing plastic beads glow from phosphorescence. This is a photoluminescent process in which a material absorbs energy and then slowly releases it in the form of visible light. which this is called Phosphorescence. What I'm tryin to say is the sun is the one lighting the stars in the dark!
Oh this is a poem lol not a question. If you perceived it as a question I mean.
Why did u ask this question then?

Lars:

@cutiekittygirl539 wrote:
@lars wrote:
@cutiekittygirl539 wrote:
Stars and paint and glowing plastic beads glow from phosphorescence. This is a photoluminescent process in which a material absorbs energy and then slowly releases it in the form of visible light. which this is called Phosphorescence. What I'm tryin to say is the sun is the one lighting the stars in the dark!
Oh this is a poem lol not a question. If you perceived it as a question I mean.
Why did u ask this question then?
It's a poem put under the writing subject? I'm looking for feedback and title suggestions. I should've made that clear before posting the poem, so that might be my bad.

CutieKittyGirl539:

@lars wrote:
@cutiekittygirl539 wrote:
@lars wrote:
@cutiekittygirl539 wrote:
Stars and paint and glowing plastic beads glow from phosphorescence. This is a photoluminescent process in which a material absorbs energy and then slowly releases it in the form of visible light. which this is called Phosphorescence. What I'm tryin to say is the sun is the one lighting the stars in the dark!
Oh this is a poem lol not a question. If you perceived it as a question I mean.
Why did u ask this question then?
It's a poem put under the writing subject? I'm looking for feedback and title suggestions. I should've made that clear before posting the poem, so that might be my bad.
I understand. Thanks for telling me! ^^

Lars:

@cutiekittygirl539 wrote:
@lars wrote:
@cutiekittygirl539 wrote:
@lars wrote:
@cutiekittygirl539 wrote:
Stars and paint and glowing plastic beads glow from phosphorescence. This is a photoluminescent process in which a material absorbs energy and then slowly releases it in the form of visible light. which this is called Phosphorescence. What I'm tryin to say is the sun is the one lighting the stars in the dark!
Oh this is a poem lol not a question. If you perceived it as a question I mean.
Why did u ask this question then?
It's a poem put under the writing subject? I'm looking for feedback and title suggestions. I should've made that clear before posting the poem, so that might be my bad.
I understand. Thanks for telling me! ^^
Yeah, sorry for the confusion!! :) /gen

CutieKittyGirl539:

@lars wrote:
@cutiekittygirl539 wrote:
@lars wrote:
@cutiekittygirl539 wrote:
@lars wrote:
@cutiekittygirl539 wrote:
Stars and paint and glowing plastic beads glow from phosphorescence. This is a photoluminescent process in which a material absorbs energy and then slowly releases it in the form of visible light. which this is called Phosphorescence. What I'm tryin to say is the sun is the one lighting the stars in the dark!
Oh this is a poem lol not a question. If you perceived it as a question I mean.
Why did u ask this question then?
It's a poem put under the writing subject? I'm looking for feedback and title suggestions. I should've made that clear before posting the poem, so that might be my bad.
I understand. Thanks for telling me! ^^
Yeah, sorry for the confusion!! :) /gen
alright :)

chuckthedonut:

This is really good @lars, keep it up !! <333

Lars:

@chuckthedonut wrote:
This is really good @lars, keep it up !! <333
Thank you !! :]

chuckthedonut:

@lars wrote:
@chuckthedonut wrote:
This is really good @lars, keep it up !! <333
Thank you !! :]
You're welcome !! <3

Pshycowolf111:

A good title would be "The Void of Life" In my opinion!

Lars:

@pshycowolf111 wrote:
A good title would be "The Void of Life" In my opinion!
Thank you for the suggestion! I will keep that in mind! :)

Pshycowolf111:

@lars wrote:
@pshycowolf111 wrote:
A good title would be "The Void of Life" In my opinion!
Thank you for the suggestion! I will keep that in mind! :)
No problem!

chuckthedonut:

@oliver69, @arieonna, @renne look at this :D

Renne:

Oh my lord-! For one I know you can do a lot more and I know you can do a lot more. I love what you have so far tho because It is amazing!^^

Arieonna:

wow i love that

OLIVER69:

Holy Shi- this hit deep. I love this poem a lot. Good Work and can't wait to hear more. Lovely < 3

Lars:

@renne wrote:
Oh my lord-! For one I know you can do a lot more and I know you can do a lot more. I love what you have so far tho because It is amazing!^^
@arieonna wrote:
wow i love that
@oliver69 wrote:
Holy Shi- this hit deep. I love this poem a lot. Good Work and can't wait to hear more. Lovely < 3
Thank you all so much !! <3

Renne:

@lars wrote:
@renne wrote:
Oh my lord-! For one I know you can do a lot more and I know you can do a lot more. I love what you have so far tho because It is amazing!^^
@arieonna wrote:
wow i love that
@oliver69 wrote:
Holy Shi- this hit deep. I love this poem a lot. Good Work and can't wait to hear more. Lovely < 3
Thank you all so much !! <3
ofc and if I offended you I am sorry..

Lars:

@renne wrote:
@lars wrote:
@renne wrote:
Oh my lord-! For one I know you can do a lot more and I know you can do a lot more. I love what you have so far tho because It is amazing!^^
@arieonna wrote:
wow i love that
@oliver69 wrote:
Holy Shi- this hit deep. I love this poem a lot. Good Work and can't wait to hear more. Lovely < 3
Thank you all so much !! <3
ofc and if I offended you I am sorry..
Don't worry. I wasn't offended in any way :]

Renne:

@lars wrote:
@renne wrote:
@lars wrote:
@renne wrote:
Oh my lord-! For one I know you can do a lot more and I know you can do a lot more. I love what you have so far tho because It is amazing!^^
@arieonna wrote:
wow i love that
@oliver69 wrote:
Holy Shi- this hit deep. I love this poem a lot. Good Work and can't wait to hear more. Lovely < 3
Thank you all so much !! <3
ofc and if I offended you I am sorry..
Don't worry. I wasn't offended in any way :]
You sure-?

Lars:

@renne wrote:
@lars wrote:
@renne wrote:
@lars wrote:
@renne wrote:
Oh my lord-! For one I know you can do a lot more and I know you can do a lot more. I love what you have so far tho because It is amazing!^^
@arieonna wrote:
wow i love that
@oliver69 wrote:
Holy Shi- this hit deep. I love this poem a lot. Good Work and can't wait to hear more. Lovely < 3
Thank you all so much !! <3
ofc and if I offended you I am sorry..
Don't worry. I wasn't offended in any way :]
You sure-?
I'm sure.

Renne:

Okay^^

lovinggabsxx:

I love this

Lars:

@lovinggabsxx wrote:
I love this
Thank you <3

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