Question

Here's chapter 10 of my story not completely finished yet

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Answer 1

Six months later, I am working at the office and planning for the wedding. I was so excited and a little nervous. Over the past months, Caleb had turned seven and he was getting so big. He has made more friends as well. Axton had taken me to a beautiful sun side cliff and had a picnic with me. And as we were talking, he said that he wanted to spend the rest of his life with me and Caleb. Then he got down on one knee and proposed. I put my hands on my mouth and started crying. I said, "Yes". He put the ring on my finger and hugged me. I was so happy. So now I am getting married to Jeremy and Axton now. They seem to be fine with it as long as they are with me. I finished up my work as I grabbed my work and walked home. Jeremy still had to work, but when I got home, Axton was waiting for me. I decided to make it worth his while. Axton smiled at me as I walked through the door. It was a good thing Caleb was at school still. I dropped my stuff by the door as I take off my shirt and get on my knees as I crawl to him
I could tell Axton enjoyed this by the size of the thing in his pants. As I got to him I spread his legs and undone his pants. He pulled me up to him. "What do you think you're doing?". I think of a lie, "What I just wanted a kiss." I knew that was a horrible lie. "I know you are lying, he pushes me onto the floor so I'm on all fours. He then whispers in my ear, "My turn to dominate and punish you." I blush as he speaks then I feel something hard against my Oreos. He then proceeds to shove it into me. I bite the inside of my cheek, holding in my moan. He pushed harder and faster as I gripped the carpet. Soon after he started feeling my inside with warm semen. I let out a loud moan and then Axton grabbed me by the hair, which was a turn-on for me, and my Oreos started getting bigger. Axton smiled as he finished Oreosing me thirty minutes later he pulled out and I rolled over onto my back as semen leaked out of my Oreos. I was panting so much, that I thought it was over, but then Axton said, "Oh look at that, getting hard for me." He lowered his lips down to my Oreos as he began sucking me off. Since I was already hard it would be easier for me to Oreos. Then I heard a car pull up into the driveway.
Axton must have heard it too because he looked up and said, "That's not Jeremy's truck, it's a black SUV. Hurry and get dressed." So I hurried and put my clothes on as we looked out the window. The next thing we saw was them surrounding the front of the house with gasoline and before he had time to run they threw a match on it. It flew us back as I tried to get up with Axton helping me. Then there were guns firing at the house, so we ran to the back door, but both of us got shot. Axton in his arm and me in my leg. He cried out in pain but ran to a toolshed that Jeremy had turned into a cool hangout for Caleb. We hid there till we heard the car pull away. We were both covered in blood and had gotten the floor into a pool of our blood. I reached into Axton's pants and pulled out his phone. I knew he would still have it in there. We called 911 to come and get us. I told them that we were behind a burning house in a toolshed.
Later the ambulance arrived, taking us to the hospital as they called Jeremy. Jeremy arrived at the hospital with Caleb. And Caleb went to Axton, whilst Jeremy went to me. "What, how, why, are you okay?" I could tell that Jeremy was worried and I could see tears in both Jeremy's and Caleb's eyes. "Love, I'm okay I just got shot in my leg and Axton just got shot in the arm." Axton then looked at Jeremy, "There were men in suits with guns and put gasoline on the outside of the house and they threw a match on it."

(to be continued)

Answer 2

wow dad this is great!!! keep up the great work <3

Answer 3

WOW THATS AMAZING

Answer 4

Awesome job!

Answer 5

#Amazing!! I really enjoyed reading this, keep up the good work !! <3