new updates on my song

My whole life is broken, it is sad and heart breaking,
So i am living in a madhouse, can't fight the madness, all you wanna do is let out, the demons from the inside, inside, i am living in a madhouse, all of my demons break down... all i wanna do is cry out, i am living in a madhouse,in my territory am i loved or am i forgotten will anyone notice me what should i do, i just feel heartbroken i feel like i am living in a madhouse what do i do, what do i do, o what do i do, there is nothing i can do, i am just in a broken madhouse, nothing will ever help, i live in a madhouse, i've always been broken in some way, all of my demons breakthrough,I feel broken inside and out, ain't trying to prout, going to speak the truth, this isn't a ruse, i am living in a madhouse, all my demons come out, i can't fight this anymore

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new updates on my song

My whole life is broken, it is sad and heart breaking,
So i am living in a madhouse, can't fight the madness, all you wanna do is let out, the demons from the inside, inside, i am living in a madhouse, all of my demons break down... all i wanna do is cry out, i am living in a madhouse,in my territory am i loved or am i forgotten will anyone notice me what should i do, i just feel heartbroken i feel like i am living in a madhouse what do i do, what do i do, o what do i do, there is nothing i can do, i am just in a broken madhouse, nothing will ever help, i live in a madhouse, i've always been broken in some way, all of my demons breakthrough,I feel broken inside and out, ain't trying to prout, going to speak the truth, this isn't a ruse, i am living in a madhouse, all my demons come out, i can't fight this anymore

Renne · Answer

I love the way you worded it I feel like you took your time and thought this through though I am concerned about this. Is everything okay? Other than that I love it!

Sandy99 · Answer

@renne wrote:

I love the way you worded it I feel like you took your time and thought this through though I am concerned about this. Is everything okay? Other than that I love it!

everything is okay and thank you

miyadadonn · Answer

sad

Arieonna · Answer

awsome update love it @sandy99

Sandy99 · Answer

@arieonna wrote:

awsome update love it @sandy99

thanks

Sandy99 · Answer

@friend3423  cuz you asked the name of the song so here is the song for now i gotta put in the updates

ElexusQuimby · Answer

Bro.  You just made me tear up from reading this.  Good job.  I love it.

Sandy99 · Answer

@elexusquimby wrote:

Bro. You just made me tear up from reading this. Good job. I love it.

thanks bestie i got more updates to add

ElexusQuimby · Answer

Okay