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Trapoutbabygirl:

so i made a poem let me know how it is poetic justice thats what people say but some people are blind by the anger and hate everyday i try and try but sometimes i break i try hard to keep peace but thats not the recipe or the key but sometimes i hate to be me.

lovemelee:

keep going but so far ur doing goood

Bluewolf2004:

Looks good! Keep up the hard thoughts and work

kayee1burke:

amazing:) Keep going

Trapoutbabygirl:

@lovemelee wrote:
keep going but so far ur doing goood
ty

Trapoutbabygirl:

@bluewolf2004 wrote:
Looks good! Keep up the hard thoughts and work
ty

Trapoutbabygirl:

@kayee1burke wrote:
amazing:) Keep going
ty

brittney1jamison:

Looks awesome, keep going! Never give up!

Trapoutbabygirl:

@brittney1jamison wrote:
Looks awesome, keep going! Never give up!
ty

brittney1jamison:

@trapoutbabygirl wrote:
@brittney1jamison wrote:
Looks awesome, keep going! Never give up!
ty
Np!

Trapoutbabygirl:

thank yall so much for the support🄰

kayee1burke:

No problem

brittney1jamison:

Np!!

Lars:

Nice job so far, keep it up !!

Trapoutbabygirl:

@lars wrote:
Nice job so far, keep it up !!
ty

YOUNGBALLER:

Good Job!

Dolphan:

Very good!!

Jeremana73:

Looks great! If you make sure to keep all the lines within a 1-2 syllable difference, it'll give it a good rhythm and make your work POP

5StarFab:

Not going to lie this poem hit different (In a good way)

Trapoutbabygirl:

@5starfab wrote:
Not going to lie this poem hit different (In a good way)
ty lol

snowie:

noice job

Trapoutbabygirl:

@snowie wrote:
noice job
Ty

snowie:

@trapoutbabygirl wrote:
@snowie wrote:
noice job
Ty
np

ButteredBalz:

It looks alright. Could be better. Never give up though.

crackedNOOB:

Not bad ig

crackedNOOB:

better than anything i can make LOL

EGFA:

Looks good keep going this poem hit me

raheem12:

we should do one tg

Manny300303199:

good job

Treeko:

its good!

Stringcheese272:

its good great job

Trapoutbabygirl:

@stringcheese272 wrote:
its good great job
Ty

Trapoutbabygirl:

@treeko wrote:
its good!
Ty

Ragtagirly:

ok

Evanescent:

Nice!

Arizona:

love it great job

prettygirlzariah:

its nice short poem

zombieblud:

ate *eats ur poem*

euphoriiic:

love it

Trapoutbabygirl:

@zombieblud wrote:
ate *eats ur poem*
lol ty

skyler420:

looks goood..

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