Question

Can u check my essay to see how I can approve it and make it better? Its about child abuse

Child abuse happens a lot and some people are unaware of this event that is happening sometimes. Some kids even die from child abuse a lot like 4.8 million kids die every day because of child abuse.



Child abuse happens every single day, and some children have even committed suicide to escape abuse, While others run away from abusive parents or anyone who is hurting them. Children are abused mentally and physically by their parents. In addition to that, they sexually abuse their children, which is something you should not do to your child or someone you care for. Some kids even get battered child syndrome some kids also get depression from it and even PTSD and other mental issues. The other one is psychological abuse. They will be terrorized and some kids also don't stand up to their parents or tell people when they should.

Sometimes child abuse can lead up to suicide so many kids have done it just to not be hurt no more. Lots of kids get emotionally abused when they do, they get anxious and act rude to other people. Child abuse needs to stop and they are gonna have trauma and they could die from it. When they get hit very hard and no one will help them. Some people in sexual abuse film themselves and their kids which is a nasty thing to do. Then, there is medical abuse which I didn't know about. Medical abuse is when you lie about the sickness of a kid that needs help. Now neglect abuse is the parent or person who fails to give the kid food and clothes, Showers, and shelter. The kids probably sleep outside or something. Additionally, they do not pay attention to or watch over them, nor do they receive affection from them.

It is estimated that there are about 4 million cases of child abuse and 7 million cases of neglect each year. The effects of child abuse are the lack of trust with people and you also might not trust lots of people because of what happened or is happening to you. You also won't have a good relationship with people you don't trust or people you know. People who abuse you will call you worthless and stupid just to mentally hurt you. Some kids can't even express themselves because of abuse. Some parents just take anger out on their children which is horrible.

Answer 1

that is really good i do understand why make a report for child Abuse it needs to stop now these parents have no rights to b hurting their kids Been their done that i just really love the effert u put in this

Answer 2

i think you did a good job, especially with describing the different types of abuse.