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Beanie:

I made another poem, it was kind of in a rush. It isn't the best I know- I act happy, But its hard to hide. My life is crappy I see he lied He never cared Why should he? I always shared All the tea About my problems About my joy He said he loved me I was fooled I used to plea For him to call me He never paid attention He called me a problem And not to mention, The pain I felt When he told me I shouldn’t be held Not by a lover Or even a friend I believed him I always did Why wouldn’t I? He was mine Then I met you I started to change I thought I’d never trust Then I trusted in [your name, not saying for purposes] You care for me You always have I always smile When I see you text I trust you I love you I always will I don’t ask much But I have one favor Just don’t leave me Stay with me and love me I can’t offer much Yet I offer my heart

Beanie:

Also sorry it's so long!-

Jungkook69:

AWWW BAE ITS CUTE and good job its really good!

Beanie:

Thank you bbg- I may delete it and make a better one late, I love you uvu

Jungkook69:

@beanie wrote:
Thank you bbg- I may delete it and make a better one late, I love you uvu
Love you toooo but dontt its goodddd

Beanie:

Noooo the last few parts don't sound good at all

Jungkook69:

@beanie wrote:
Noooo the last few parts don't sound good at all
But its gooddd

Beanie:

Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot

Jungkook69:

@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo

Beanie:

@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo

Jungkook69:

@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo
nooo

Beanie:

@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo
nooo
bae dont chu argue. yk whos in control :p

Jungkook69:

@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo
nooo
bae dont chu argue. yk whos in control :p
Oopsiess

Beanie:

@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo
nooo
bae dont chu argue. yk whos in control :p
Oopsiess
ha.

Jungkook69:

@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo
nooo
bae dont chu argue. yk whos in control :p
Oopsiess
ha.
Im older sooooooo im in control

Beanie:

@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo
nooo
bae dont chu argue. yk whos in control :p
Oopsiess
ha.
Im older sooooooo im in control
oh you wanna bet??

Jungkook69:

@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo
nooo
bae dont chu argue. yk whos in control :p
Oopsiess
ha.
Im older sooooooo im in control
oh you wanna bet??
Yes

Beanie:

@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo
nooo
bae dont chu argue. yk whos in control :p
Oopsiess
ha.
Im older sooooooo im in control
oh you wanna bet??
Yes
just wait till i get home and get on padlet

Jungkook69:

@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo
nooo
bae dont chu argue. yk whos in control :p
Oopsiess
ha.
Im older sooooooo im in control
oh you wanna bet??
Yes
just wait till i get home and get on padlet
OH DAMN bet

Beanie:

@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo
nooo
bae dont chu argue. yk whos in control :p
Oopsiess
ha.
Im older sooooooo im in control
oh you wanna bet??
Yes
just wait till i get home and get on padlet
OH DAMN bet
XD we both know i'll win this like i did last time

Arieonna:

amazing poem i cant belive someone left u like that and said those words to u nice u found someone else

Jungkook69:

@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo
nooo
bae dont chu argue. yk whos in control :p
Oopsiess
ha.
Im older sooooooo im in control
oh you wanna bet??
Yes
just wait till i get home and get on padlet
OH DAMN bet
XD we both know i'll win this like i did last time
Mmm no

Beanie:

@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo
nooo
bae dont chu argue. yk whos in control :p
Oopsiess
ha.
Im older sooooooo im in control
oh you wanna bet??
Yes
just wait till i get home and get on padlet
OH DAMN bet
XD we both know i'll win this like i did last time
Mmm no
oh you just wait bbg~

Renne:

I think you could have taken your time and done better but I like it I see that some of the words don't rhyme but I like it. What's your title?

Renne:

May i ask whats wrong?

MidniteSunny:

well dat was loely, some of ze lines didnt rlly stick to ze rhyming thing chu were doing at first tho but gj, glad at least SUMBODY ish helping chu see through ppl, goodness knows chu needed it

MidniteSunny:

lovely*

Beanie:

my bf rlly helps me :> am getting better slowly

Beanie:

@renne wrote:
May i ask whats wrong?
wym love?

Jungkook69:

@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo
nooo
bae dont chu argue. yk whos in control :p
Oopsiess
ha.
Im older sooooooo im in control
oh you wanna bet??
Yes
just wait till i get home and get on padlet
OH DAMN bet
XD we both know i'll win this like i did last time
Mmm no
oh you just wait bbg~
mmmmm

Beanie:

@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo
nooo
bae dont chu argue. yk whos in control :p
Oopsiess
ha.
Im older sooooooo im in control
oh you wanna bet??
Yes
just wait till i get home and get on padlet
OH DAMN bet
XD we both know i'll win this like i did last time
Mmm no
oh you just wait bbg~
mmmmm
yk ill win

Jungkook69:

@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo
nooo
bae dont chu argue. yk whos in control :p
Oopsiess
ha.
Im older sooooooo im in control
oh you wanna bet??
Yes
just wait till i get home and get on padlet
OH DAMN bet
XD we both know i'll win this like i did last time
Mmm no
oh you just wait bbg~
mmmmm
yk ill win
Nahhh

Beanie:

@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@jungkook69 wrote:
@beanie wrote:
Thank you but we both know I needa fix a lot
not much thooo
Yess much thooo
nooo
bae dont chu argue. yk whos in control :p
Oopsiess
ha.
Im older sooooooo im in control
oh you wanna bet??
Yes
just wait till i get home and get on padlet
OH DAMN bet
XD we both know i'll win this like i did last time
Mmm no
oh you just wait bbg~
mmmmm
yk ill win
Nahhh
oh u just wait

Renne:

Never mind

karissafrazier:

can u 3 flirt somewhere else x-x

Renne:

@karissafrazier wrote:
can u 3 flirt somewhere else x-x
3?

chuckthedonut:

This is really good !! Keep up the good work !! <3

Lars:

Great work so far! I'm sure that once you improve it it'll be even better!

Beanie:

@karissafrazier wrote:
can u 3 flirt somewhere else x-x
haha no

Beanie:

Also thank you Lars and chuck!

chuckthedonut:

@beanie wrote:
Also thank you Lars and chuck!
You're welcome !! <3

karissafrazier:

@beanie wrote:
@karissafrazier wrote:
can u 3 flirt somewhere else x-x
haha no
why not- go flirt elsewhere

Beanie:

@karissafrazier wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@karissafrazier wrote:
can u 3 flirt somewhere else x-x
haha no
why not- go flirt elsewhere
you didnt even have to say anything. its our joke.

karissafrazier:

@beanie wrote:
@karissafrazier wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@karissafrazier wrote:
can u 3 flirt somewhere else x-x
haha no
why not- go flirt elsewhere
you didnt even have to say anything. its our joke.
yea well then why'd kook tell me ur her wifey if it's a joke

Beanie:

@karissafrazier wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@karissafrazier wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@karissafrazier wrote:
can u 3 flirt somewhere else x-x
haha no
why not- go flirt elsewhere
you didnt even have to say anything. its our joke.
yea well then why'd kook tell me ur her wifey if it's a joke
who do wha-

karissafrazier:

@beanie wrote:
@karissafrazier wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@karissafrazier wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@karissafrazier wrote:
can u 3 flirt somewhere else x-x
haha no
why not- go flirt elsewhere
you didnt even have to say anything. its our joke.
yea well then why'd kook tell me ur her wifey if it's a joke
who do wha-
@jungkook69 said ur her wifey

Beanie:

@karissafrazier wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@karissafrazier wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@karissafrazier wrote:
@beanie wrote:
@karissafrazier wrote:
can u 3 flirt somewhere else x-x
haha no
why not- go flirt elsewhere
you didnt even have to say anything. its our joke.
yea well then why'd kook tell me ur her wifey if it's a joke
who do wha-
@jungkook69 said ur her wifey
yes yes we are. we just dont make out an all. she my bae :p

karissafrazier:

proof for u

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emilysmith1105:

good poem

Dolphan:

Very good!!

Rosietheboss:

Great

Flowerpower5290:

Wow this really good

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