Question

here are the new updates to broken madhouse
let me know what y'all think thank you, and plus thanks too @FutureRapper for the help



My whole life is broken, it is sad and heartbreaking,
So I am living in a madhouse, can't fight the madness, all you wanna do is let out, the demons from the inside, inside, I am living in a madhouse, all of my demons break down... all I wanna do is cry out, I am living in a madhouse, in my territory am I loved or am I forgotten will anyone notice me what should I do I just feel heartbroken I feel like I am living in a madhouse what do I do, what do I do, o what do I do, there is nothing I can do, I am just in a broken madhouse, nothing will ever help, I live in a madhouse, I've always been broken in some way, all of my demons breakthroughs, I feel broken inside and out, ain't trying to prout, going to speak the truth this isn't a ruse my songs move people madhouse madhouse madhouse is my house welcome to the madhouse take a sit a join the family madness is all I know I breathe horror speak crazy eat blood my friend call us vallians your lazy and hazy If you thin we're not crazy

Answer 1

@Williammcgeorge , @OLIVER69

Answer 2

@ddog

Answer 3

@arieonna and @Renne

Answer 4

It is pretty deep keep up on the good work

Answer 5

Keep speaking from your heart hun!^^

Answer 6

thank for the shout out

Answer 7

Ofc hun

Answer 8

I like the deep meaning of this, son. You really are a good song artist. Keep up the good work son. And try to not let anyone break you down. < 3

Answer 9

you're welcome ^^

Answer 10

:)

Answer 11

gj ^^

Answer 12

@ElexusQuimby

Answer 13

Damn. Love LOve LOve 😍

Answer 14

Dang, this is truly a wonderful song. I think that you made it really good. I think you have potential to doing something really amazing in the future. I'm not just saying this to make you feel good. But I want you to know the truth, which the truth is that this is great, everything that you post here is amazing. Ily bsf, nice job !! <3

Answer 15

@TheKaylaHope this is his song

Answer 16

Thanks

Answer 17

If I were to critque as if it was your own life:

That is an intense and emotional piece of writing. It sounds like you are going through a lot of pain and turmoil in your life. It takes a lot of courage to express your thoughts and emotions through art, and I can see that you put a lot of heart and soul into this piece. From what I gather in the lyrics, you feel trapped in a madhouse of your own mind, unable to escape the pain and demons that haunt you. It's understandable to feel overwhelmed and lost in such a situation, but it's important to know that you are not alone. Many people struggle with similar feelings, and there are resources and support available to help you navigate through the darkness.