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"I Love to Hate You"
Just one look at you
Tempting me, teasing me, tormenting me
I hate the feelings you evoke
Greed
Desire
Lust
Just want to hold you, devour you
I don’t want to see you go
But I can never resist the last chocolate in the box!

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Poem time - Feedback

"I Love to Hate You" 
Just one look at you 
Tempting me, teasing me, tormenting me 
I hate the feelings you evoke 
Greed 
Desire 
Lust 
Just want to hold you, devour you 
I don’t want to see you go 
But I can never resist the last chocolate in the box!

Bella7285 · Answer

thats great bby

Lars · Answer

Not bad! Keep up the good work.

chuckthedonut · Answer

XD, I loved that ending sm !! This is soo fun and cool lol !! <3

OLIVER69 · Answer

Thank you, guys, so much. It really means a lot to me. < 3

chuckthedonut · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

Thank you, guys, so much. It really means a lot to me. < 3

You're welcome !! :D