I've made a Physics poem for extra credit. - feedback?

The electricity moving the cord
Charging from one source
Could light a dark path
Thought it was cool when connected to a green light
So many colors and nowhere to go
Wouldn’t it be cool to make the lights travel the way electricity does?

Gravity is a huge part of Earth
If we didn’t have it, we would float
It would be okay in all, but
Once we reached the atmosphere,
Our bodies and minds would be no more

The weight of our bodies affects the way we move
How Much work did we put in
Or how much force we use
You may be light, or you may be heavy,
But one thing is for sure is,
We always put our backs on how much work we do

Solids, liquids, or gasses
So many things to think about
What makes up these beautiful things?
So many things are these
But there is an important thing I got to ask,
Do you have a favorite?
Solid, liquid, or Gas.

So there are three laws of motions
All made by a guy named Newton.
So honestly, what is so special about them?
Well, an object will stay moving or at rest until acted on by an unbalanced force.
Second, the force of an object is equal to the mass of the object times acceleration.
And finally, for every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction.
So there are three laws of motion
Any questions?

Question

I've made a Physics poem for extra credit. - feedback?

The electricity moving the cord
Charging from one source
Could light a dark path
Thought it was cool when connected to a green light
So many colors and nowhere to go
Wouldn’t it be cool to make the lights travel the way electricity does?

Gravity is a huge part of Earth
If we didn’t have it, we would float
It would be okay in all, but
Once we reached the atmosphere,
Our bodies and minds would be no more

The weight of our bodies affects the way we move
How Much work did we put in
Or how much force we use
You may be light, or you may be heavy,
But one thing is for sure is,
We always put our backs on how much work we do

Solids, liquids, or gasses
So many things to think about
What makes up these beautiful things?
So many things are these
But there is an important thing I got to ask,
Do you have a favorite?
Solid, liquid, or Gas.

So there are three laws of motions
All made by a guy named Newton.
So honestly, what is so special about them?
Well, an object will stay moving or at rest until acted on by an unbalanced force.
Second, the force of an object is equal to the mass of the object times acceleration.
And finally, for every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction.
So there are three laws of motion
Any questions?

Charliemfs1321 · Answer

Very good. I like how you make these poems and now you made one for extra credit. AMAZING. Like Always.

5172319 · Answer

its good ur definitly gonna get a good grade

OLIVER69 · Answer

Thank you guys and I did get 20 out of 30 extra credit points. If only I spoke in front of the class. But my teacher still liked my poem so thank you guys for the kind words.

Lorax · Answer

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Charliemfs1321 · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

Thank you guys and I did get 20 out of 30 extra credit points. If only I spoke in front of the class. But my teacher still liked my poem so thank you guys for the kind words.

You should have gotten 1,000,000 points

OLIVER69 · Answer

@charliemfs1321 wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

Thank you guys and I did get 20 out of 30 extra credit points. If only I spoke in front of the class. But my teacher still liked my poem so thank you guys for the kind words.

You should have gotten 1,000,000 points

agreed, but I should have got full points rather if I presented it or not, social anxiety is not fun, so full points I should have got.