Question

I made a story called Shaun's Dragon

Chapter One: Introductions

Shaun was no ordinary kid, in fact his father was the world's greatest villain. Nobody knew Shaun was one of the sons of this villain, nobody except him and his brother. Shaun's brother, Will, hated their father's guts. Shaun was younger than Will but he was smarter and faster. The brothers watched out for each other and loved each other very much, even though they fought. The boys' mother died when they were young. Will had taken up a job as a mechanic and wasn't usually home till midnight, because they had to live on their own. While trying to stay away from their father, Shaun has learned every style of martial arts there is, getting ready to battle their father some day. Though Shaun has also been going to school, but he has had a rough time with homework, worried that his father will find them. Will has been saving up money to move to Japan, their mother's homeland.Though Will has not been able to keep all the money he saves, because he has to pay rent and feed him and Shaun. Shaun has been up all night lately, worried that their father will find them and make them his warriors. Shaun and Will do not want to be evil though. But what the boys don't know is that their mother had the powers of ice and fire, and they are going to be passed down to them. Will they find these powers within them, and are they going to be able to control them?

Find out later in the story.

Answer 1

That is a really good story. I enjoy it and I'm very intrigued to find out what happens in the story. I can tell it will be good. I already like the character Will in this. I can't wait for the next part/chapter of this story. Good Job. < 3

Answer 2

Ok ty @oliver69 for the kind words

Answer 3

Make one about me

Answer 4

The lorax

Answer 5

What?

Answer 6

Make one about the lorax!

Answer 7

That's already a book

Answer 8

Idc

Answer 9

Revamp it

Answer 10

umm

Answer 11

I'm already working on this story so I mean

Answer 12

Idk if I could do one on the Lorax

Answer 13

Its good

Answer 14

Keep the work up

Answer 15

ty

Answer 16

Np

Answer 17

this is not a question👍

Answer 18

What?

Answer 19

So Chapter Two Preview: Shaun meets a new kid named Felix and he feels really good around him and starts to get a crush on him>

Answer 20

Good job so far !!

Answer 21

TY @lars for the kind words they mean alot to me!

Answer 22

But pls also thank @oliver69 too because he is co-writer. So i cannot take full credit. And I can't wait for Chapter Two either. SO many ideas are going through my head.

Answer 23

ty @lars @chuckthedonut and @lorax for the kind words. And ty @oliver69 for being my co-writer.

Answer 24

ty and we will

Answer 25

Aww you're so sweet. You did most of it though, but I was happy to help and I'm so excited for chapter 2 just don't put too much in chapter 2 and save some for other chapters. But I honestly thank you for giving me credit it too. < 3

Answer 26

Well ik that

Answer 27

but yeah

Answer 28

but you gave me the idea of this story

Answer 29

niceeee

Answer 30

Good Job

Answer 31

Cool