Question

i wrote this song.....
Look no i aint make it, I aint well known. if they want another me they gon need to make a clone, think i got a perfect life, couple things wrong. I dont do body shots i aim straight for the dome. only 17 move like im grown never had sh*t had to get it on my own. Nights i cant sleep theres a drunk in my home momma with a woman beater she cant stand being alone. now every night she prepare for the worst, cant say much she convinced it gonna work. Momma told me be careful and put your self first told her "teach what you preach you dont even know your worth" If it happened in the dark come to the light said what i said i dont care who get tight. Daddy wasnt there for most of my life now a couple years passed now he tryna make it right.


thats my life

Answer 1

can yall rate it out of 10?

Answer 2

9

Answer 3

thanks i was inspired to write it based of my whole life

Answer 4

10 If you need help with more song I'm a songwriter

Answer 5

6

Answer 6

Maybe a 7.5. It's great !! <3

Answer 7

thxxxx

Answer 8

5

Answer 9

5

Answer 10

great job