song i'm working on for my boyfriend called u did

you took by the hand and showed me a land I didn't know you did you gave me everything from your heart to your last name you did you gave a note the words I love you wrote you did you gave me all your love when I just wasn't enough you did you saw right from the start that I needed your heart you did
you brought back the love that I let go of you did

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song i'm working on for my boyfriend   called u did

you took by the hand and showed me a land I didn't know  you did                                                                                              you gave me everything from your heart to your last name you did                                          you gave a note the words I love you wrote you did                                                             you gave me all your love when I just wasn't enough you did                                                             you saw right from  the start  that I needed your heart you did              
  you brought back the love that I let go of you did

Jules17 · Answer

< 33

ihatelifeFS420 · Answer

@jules17 wrote:

< 33

<3

jago · Answer

i love ur song

ihatelifeFS420 · Answer

@jago wrote:

i love ur song

thanks

jago · Answer

yw

Renne · Answer

I love it and I think you can write more to be honest. But I love it so far

ihatelifeFS420 · Answer

@renne wrote:

I love it and I think you can write more to be honest. But I love it so far

thank you and yea i'm kinda stuck right now

Renne · Answer

It's okay I like it so far

ihatelifeFS420 · Answer

@renne wrote:

It's okay I like it so far

thank u

hopoutjazzz · Answer

i love it...

ihatelifeFS420 · Answer

@hopoutjazzz wrote:

i love it...

thanks

chuckthedonut · Answer

I think that it's a good start. But a way to improve it is when you add "you did" at the end of the all the sentences it didn't make some sense. I think with more lyrics it'll sound better, but so far it's pretty good. I think your boyfriend will think it's sweet. <3

ihatelifeFS420 · Answer

@chuckthedonut wrote:

I think that it's a good start. But a way to improve it is when you add "you did" at the end of the all the sentences it didn't make some sense. I think with more lyrics it'll sound better, but so far it's pretty good. I think your boyfriend will think it's sweet. <3

alright thank you that's very helpful

chuckthedonut · Answer

@ihatelifefs420 wrote:

@chuckthedonut wrote:

I think that it's a good start. But a way to improve it is when you add "you did" at the end of the all the sentences it didn't make some sense. I think with more lyrics it'll sound better, but so far it's pretty good. I think your boyfriend will think it's sweet. <3

alright thank you that's very helpful

You're welcome !! <3

kacchan · Answer

its is fantastic i love it you did a really good job

ihatelifeFS420 · Answer

@kacchan wrote:

its is fantastic i love it you did a really good job

thank you

DsneadBeats · Answer

this is good sing it and send it to me I can make a song out of it

ihatelifeFS420 · Answer

@dsneadbeats wrote:

this is good sing it and send it to me I can make a song out of it

alright thanks

NotLeiland · Answer

Nice job

ihatelifeFS420 · Answer

@notleiland wrote:

Nice job

thanks leiland

Luigi0210 · Answer

Nice song

AxL1nna · Answer

I love it!<333

ihatelifeFS420 · Answer

@luigi0210 wrote:

Nice song

thank u

ihatelifeFS420 · Answer

@axl1nna wrote:

I love it!<333

thanksss

Midnight97 · Answer

It is amazing keep up the great work

ihatelifeFS420 · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

It is amazing keep up the great work

thank you sm

Midnight97 · Answer

You're welcome

Ravenous · Answer

Mid

ihatelifeFS420 · Answer

@ravenous wrote:

Mid

alr thxs

Lars · Answer

Interesting !!

ihatelifeFS420 · Answer

@lars wrote:

Interesting !!

yea