Question

I close my eyes and take a breathe
thinking about what you done said
is it me or you instead
that maybe i'll be better dead
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you told me it was all okay
you lied when you said you'd stay
like an object on a table oh its a vase
one small push and it would break
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you really did me dirty
the point where the devils lurking
i try i try i try... but it seems as though
my prescriptions are not working...
(free verse poem)
A small moment- LInux

Answer 1

As I close my eyes and take a deep breath,
I ponder over the words you said.
Is it me who's at fault or is it you instead?
Feeling like death could be a better option instead.

You assured me that everything's alright,
But your promise of staying was just a lie.
Like an object on a table, a fragile vase,
One small nudge and it shatters into a million pieces.

You treated me unfairly, so dirty and mean,
Leaving me feeling like the devil's lurking within.
I tried and tried, but it seems in vain,
My prescriptions aren't helping to ease the pain.

(A free-verse poem by Linux, titled "A Small Moment")

Answer 2

wow that's amazing

Answer 3

Is this based off of something you have experienced before?

Answer 4

love that so much

Answer 5

Wonderful!!