Wrote a poem about the darkness and its effects on the brain in a weak state of mind.

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Rango · Answer

Reverse pyschology: Rango
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angels are screaming
demons are singing 
the blood is seeping
the lord already seen it

oh no i mean it ,
i barely feel it
i be the realest yet i lie 
when i say that i'm healin'

fake smiles gleaming..
inside i am grieving..
the dark that i'm breathing..
left unloved with no feeling..

ElexusQuimby · Answer

I love this poem.  It is so dark and holds a lot of meaning to it.  UYou did a really good job on this poem

devthefallenangel · Answer

This is really just.. wow. This is fantastic. A lot of people can relate to this and you did an amazing job.

Arieonna · Answer

OMG  this is so good i could feel all the emotions in it i love that poem so much Make more

chuckthedonut · Answer

This is a really good poem because you put feeling and emotion to it, I thin that you did awesome !! Keep it up !! <3

chuckthedonut · Answer

Spelling error..I meant think

D3AD4YOU · Answer

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Midnight97 · Answer

Love it keep it up

BrokenMoon · Answer

I love this. Add capital letters and its a masterpiece

D3AD4YOU · Answer

@brokenmoon wrote:

I love this. Add capital letters and its a masterpiece

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D3AD4YOU · Answer

Past the punctuation.  It's already a masterpiece

D3AD4YOU · Answer

See past it*

BrokenMoon · Answer

@d3ad4you wrote:

See past it*

haha it already is ik i was just trying to help... srry TWT

Dolphan · Answer

Amazing!! Great Job!!

Flowerpower5290 · Answer

Cooll!!