i've been working on a song and i don't know how it is let me know :) and i need help to add more to it

All life is war, nothing to do to stop the madness or sadness it is all a nightmare, all you wanna do is hide but you can't

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i've been working on a song and i don't know how it is let me know :) and i need help to add more to it

All life is war, nothing to do to stop the madness or sadness it is all a nightmare, all you wanna do is hide but you can't

Bluewolf2004 · Answer

.. that's true.. wow, means imma be facing a nightmare when I get into the army

Midnight97 · Answer

@bluewolf2004 wrote:

.. that's true.. wow, means imma be facing a nightmare when I get into the army

fr

pennalopee · Answer

I feel you on that

Midnight97 · Answer

@pennalopee wrote:

I feel you on that

really?

Hislilbaby102 · Answer

Here is something you can add if you like it. But  you can't fix it we is just livin the big ship reck x2 times that feels like it never gonna end

Midnight97 · Answer

@hislilbaby102 wrote:

Here is something you can add if you like it. But you can't fix it we is just livin the big ship reck x2 times that feels like it never gonna end

thx

Alanaaaaaaa · Answer

This world is a deep threat,
The sadness and madness has only come so far,
Nothing compared to the thoughts inside my head,
You are only as real as it can get,
All I know if life is a war,
With no end

Midnight97 · Answer

@alanaaaaaaa wrote:

This world is a deep threat, The sadness and madness has only come so far, Nothing compared to the thoughts inside my head, You are only as real as it can get, All I know if life is a war, With no end

thx

TheKaylaHope · Answer

I'd love to give you feedback on your song. Your lyrics are very emotional and express a lot of pain and struggle. It definitely has a somber tone, which can be very effective in music.

Midnight97 · Answer

well it's not like my friends song lol

TheKaylaHope · Answer

Verse 1: All life is war, can't escape the strife No matter what you do, can't outrun this life Madness and sadness, it's all too much to bear Feeling trapped in a nightmare, can't find a way out of here Chorus: All you wanna do is hide but you can't All you see is darkness, can't find a sliver of light In this cruel world, nothing feels right All life is war, an endless fight Verse 2: Every day is a battle, every night a war Can't escape the pain, can't take it anymore Looking for a sanctuary, a place to call home But everywhere you turn, you feel so alone Chorus: All you wanna do is hide but you can't All you see is darkness, can't find a sliver of light In this cruel world, nothing feels right All life is war, an endless fight Bridge: But even in the midst of the chaos and pain There's a glimmer of hope, a chance to break these chains We may be battered and bruised, but we're not alone Together we stand, and together we'll find our way home Chorus: All you wanna do is hide but you can't All you see is darkness, can't find a sliver of light In this cruel world, nothing feels right All life is war, an endless fight Outro: Hold your head up high, and don't back down We'll find a way through, turn this world around All life is war, but there's a battle to be won We'll rise up strong, and we'll journey on and on.

Midnight97 · Answer

@thekaylahope wrote:

Verse 1: All life is war, can't escape the strife No matter what you do, can't outrun this life Madness and sadness, it's all too much to bear Feeling trapped in a nightmare, can't find a way out of here Chorus: All you wanna do is hide but you can't All you see is darkness, can't find a sliver of light In this cruel world, nothing feels right All life is war, an endless fight Verse 2: Every day is a battle, every night a war Can't escape the pain, can't take it anymore Looking for a sanctuary, a place to call home But everywhere you turn, you feel so alone Chorus: All you wanna do is hide but you can't All you see is darkness, can't find a sliver of light In this cruel world, nothing feels right All life is war, an endless fight Bridge: But even in the midst of the chaos and pain There's a glimmer of hope, a chance to break these chains We may be battered and bruised, but we're not alone Together we stand, and together we'll find our way home Chorus: All you wanna do is hide but you can't All you see is darkness, can't find a sliver of light In this cruel world, nothing feels right All life is war, an endless fight Outro: Hold your head up high, and don't back down We'll find a way through, turn this world around All life is war, but there's a battle to be won We'll rise up strong, and we'll journey on and on.

thanks for the help

TheKaylaHope · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

@thekaylahope wrote:

Verse 1: All life is war, can't escape the strife No matter what you do, can't outrun this life Madness and sadness, it's all too much to bear Feeling trapped in a nightmare, can't find a way out of here Chorus: All you wanna do is hide but you can't All you see is darkness, can't find a sliver of light In this cruel world, nothing feels right All life is war, an endless fight Verse 2: Every day is a battle, every night a war Can't escape the pain, can't take it anymore Looking for a sanctuary, a place to call home But everywhere you turn, you feel so alone Chorus: All you wanna do is hide but you can't All you see is darkness, can't find a sliver of light In this cruel world, nothing feels right All life is war, an endless fight Bridge: But even in the midst of the chaos and pain There's a glimmer of hope, a chance to break these chains We may be battered and bruised, but we're not alone Together we stand, and together we'll find our way home Chorus: All you wanna do is hide but you can't All you see is darkness, can't find a sliver of light In this cruel world, nothing feels right All life is war, an endless fight Outro: Hold your head up high, and don't back down We'll find a way through, turn this world around All life is war, but there's a battle to be won We'll rise up strong, and we'll journey on and on.

thanks for the help

Ofc <3

lovehim · Answer

Sense this is about life why not input things that happened to you into a song trauma, mental issues,

Arizona · Answer

That is really good u should add a little more to it so it does not take like 5 seconds to sing

Bradley223 · Answer

yo any of yall wanna vc?

Midnight97 · Answer

@bradley223 wrote:

yo any of yall wanna vc?

can't rn