Question

I made a book that took all day to write called the Cave of Silence comment below what you think and if i should make a 2nd part were my characters Ava and Josh starts Dating also comment if u have a better Title for the book

Answer 1

Once Apon a time there were 4 friends that were werewolf they were born as werewolf they learned to Hunt together and defend their Self together nothing would ever separate their friendship Their names were Ruby, Crystal, Ava, and most importantly Emerald They were really good friends and knew each other well Emerald has Emerald Eyes and loves the color Forest green she also is a fast Runner and quick Hider and also Don't really Follow Rules Much she always gets into Trouble but Emerald is Very Smart she can solve problems in matter of Seconds Emerald also has a big sister that went missing Years ago her sister is named Sapphire she is 4 years older than Emerald Emerald is 15 years old which means Sapphire is 19 years old Ruby has Red eyes with a little Dazzle in them always Follows the Rules loves to play with her Friends she is also a Fast Runner and really good at Exploding Things When she is doing a science Experiment's she also has her Wolf Ears where she can sense Danger coming from over 200 miles away which gives them enough time to Run and Hide She also has a kind hart and loves the color Ruby most likely because her name she is the only child Crystal is really talented she is a really good singer and has lots of friends she also Follows Rules and tries to keep her friend Emerald out of trouble she has the power to camouflage that's how she keeps her self from the Hunters she also is A really fast Runner she loves the color till and always follows the school dress code And finally their friend Ava she is a unique werewolf unknown like the others that has 1 wolf power she has 2 wolf power invisibility and she can also see through things her favorite color is Blue she is really smart she never once got in any trouble and follow Rules like her other friends except Emerald who likes to break Rules Ava also has no siblings And loves the nature she always wants to learn more about Flowers and how they develop or even Humans and how they act she wonders Do humans have powers? do they hear things from 200 miles away? or what do they eat? but her mother tells her to Stop wondering about Humans has they are just Monsters that eat Wolfs The 4 friends get along really well together They know each other in Grade school when one gets bullied they then the other will stick up for their friend Ava is the one that always get bullied because she always wants to learn about Human beings that people make Fun of her and call her a Human because she wants to learn about them they say that some day the humans will come for her The 4 friends were In the forest talking when all of a sudden they heard a gun shot it startled them so bad that they Ran as fast as they could Not knowing they left Ava behind in the forest Ava was not a fast Runner she also does not know her directions in the forest that's why someone is always with her sh didn't know what way was home every path looked the same so she had to do what she could do use her Invisibility power so she did not get seen Then the Hunters came she actually got to see a human in real life before but they looked scary holding Guns and knives to kill the animals in the Forest she became frightened that her friend Ran and left her behind she became to wonder will they turn back and look for her will she get eaten alive what will happen to get then one hunter go closer to get so she had to move farther but this one did not have no weapons on him she seen is Full face and became to have butterflies in her Stomach she dazzled into Space like to other she than was thinking was she really walling in love with a Human when she was told many times Humans are Monsters what should she do then all of a Sudden all the Hunters left except this one her invisibility power Ran off for the Next hour so she tried to Run until he noticed her She turned around and tried to act all brave but she was really scared he started Talking when he knew she was a werewolf he talked like he was not gonna hurt her He said "My name's Josh i know you are a werewolf i can tell by your ears I wont tell i think its cool and that u are very pretty what u doing out here alone with no friends shouldn't werewolf be with their pack to protect each other?" she then began to think he was really talking to me saying i am pretty? then she replies " hi my name is Ava actually i was with my friends but we heard Gun shots and then it scared us so they ran but i am not so fast of a Runner so i got left behind i don't know my way back to my Cave then he tells her not to worry and that he can help her get home safely with out his family seeing her like he didn't want her to get hurt from Hunters and that he seen Good in her than she began to feel Calm again than he says "let me find u something to cover your wolf ears tho you Don't want to be Caught with them you Don't want to know what the others Do to you" then he took her hand starting to talk to her asking her about her self and why she didn't Run he also asked about her Family if she has Siblings or or werewolf does school she soon to answer all his question and starts asking him Questions like what Humans Eat and What they do for Fun and how they do school and also she asked if Humans have powers then all of a Sudden he stopped and start laughing and Says "no we don't have magic like werewolf do our power is friendship we Don't need no powers to get threw life or hide we have our Friends to help us threw life" then she got in Shock telling him that all the other werewolf Say that humans are Monsters they just kill us eat us use us for cloths than she Explained that she never once Met a human before so she wasn't sure what was True she than Explained that she always dreamed of learning about Humans what every thing about them if they are nice and love to play or if they Just kill werewolf then he began to say "some Humans has a heart and care for the nature But then their is the evil Humans that go threw life by killing the Nature and hurting what ever they see I am the Human that adore every inch of the Nature and that his father raised him to be grateful for what the earth have and that he shouldn't destroy the Forest" then they both laughed and she Fell in love every seconds they talk Then Josh starts to tell her that he really likes hr and that she shouldn't let other people get her her life when she gets in shock she found the perfect thing to say "Josh i liked you since the day we met a couple days ago when we met i thought u were going to hurt me but then you Explained to me every thing about the world its Crazy how the world is" then Josh did the unexpected and Leaned forward and kissed Ava straight on the Lips she started to Blush afterwards 2 hours later she fell asleep but Josh got up getting ready to head off the trail again but he noticed that she was sleeping so he picked her up and carried her It has been 6 days of being Gone and Josh said that they could be almost there maybe about 14 hours left until they arrive at Ava's Cave to see her friends again She than tells Josh all about her friends and says how they met and what powers they have but then says that she has a second power unlike the Rest that have 1 power she tells him that she has Invisibility and Mind Controlling than he asked if she could show him the Mind controlling so she did she showed him that she could move a tree with only her mind and then showed him her Invisibility powers then they started Laughing together until they Ran into Emerald, Ruby, and Crystal They were shocked when they seen her again but with a human and began to ask why he wasn't gonna hurt her than Josh explained that he wasn't and never will be a Hunter saying that he was helping Ava get home safely with out getting hurt and that they should keep a close eye on their friends you never know if they are in great danger AS they began in shock hearing a human tell them that they need to keep a better eye on Ava they asked him questions about Human life wanting to also know more about Humans so he told them about Humans and that there can be better humans out their then Emerald ask them if they captured a werewolf named Sapphire and he Said "Yes" then she started to get Upset than he said "when Sapphire was captured she was brought to a secret place but his brother Saved her and helped her Escape" then she started to change from Upset to Happy and she asked "Is she alive?" he said "Yes" she asked where she was but before he could answer Sapphire showed up and said "Here"as Emerald began exited and Happy her sister returned she and the Rest of Ava's friends gave her a Hug and took her back home Safe and Sound her family was worried that she would get hurt by Humans and that they would not get to see Ava again as their is not one time that she ever stops thinking about Josh as she wish she sees Josh again

Answer 2

@aries

Answer 3

I love it!

Answer 4

Nice (:

Answer 5

It looks geat

Answer 6

nice book brodie

Answer 7

That is a very nice book and I love the title "Cave of Silence" so cool! Very profound and interesting I might add, thank you so much for sharing!

Answer 8

I literally love this. Needs some work on punctuation but other than that FIVE STARS!