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lea0728:

a pome i made :]

lea0728:

when you feel insain ur lafghing at everything thats wrong thinking of lighting someone on fire and runing down the alilyway thinking of runin far far away yelling at the way thjings are im feeling like im going crazy i feel like im going crazy for the light in your eyes im going crazy insaine feeling your hands are cold waching you walk off from one sutuation to the next wanting to comfort you ur cryes never went unheard wanting to bring you in closely i feel like im going insain for you ur as bright as fire can be in runing down the allyway to you geting lost in my mind just thinking of you ur the light iv bin seeking for forewver felling like im going insaine insaine for you the way you smile the way you light up a room the way ur lips are perfectly pink the way they part ever so slightly when your suprised the way ur lafgh is so light the way you play with your hands when your nurvuse the way you smile when your in the moment its the way you make me go insaine for you im going insaine ur eyes light up like fireworks on the 4th of july you walk with the confedence like you were ment to be im going insaine inasine insaine

Dolphan:

This is absolutely amazing. I feel your pain in this. Great job, and don't ever give up!!

lea0728:

lol i was bired and just got regceted by a girl i relly liked

@dolphan wrote:
This is absolutely amazing. I feel your pain in this. Great job, and don't ever give up!!

Dolphan:

@lea0728 wrote:
lol i was bired and just got regceted by a girl i relly liked
@dolphan wrote:
This is absolutely amazing. I feel your pain in this. Great job, and don't ever give up!!
I feel you, I'm sorry they did that, they don't deserve you at all. If you need anything, feel free to dm me, I'm all ears

lea0728:

@dolphan wrote:
@lea0728 wrote:
lol i was bired and just got regceted by a girl i relly liked
@dolphan wrote:
This is absolutely amazing. I feel your pain in this. Great job, and don't ever give up!!
I feel you, I'm sorry they did that, they don't deserve you at all. If you need anything, feel free to dm me, I'm all ears
lol i knew i would get rejecterd shes one of my best friends im actuely happy i got rejected but this pome is more so about a love i lost a long time ago

Dolphan:

@lea0728 wrote:
@dolphan wrote:
@lea0728 wrote:
lol i was bired and just got regceted by a girl i relly liked
@dolphan wrote:
This is absolutely amazing. I feel your pain in this. Great job, and don't ever give up!!
I feel you, I'm sorry they did that, they don't deserve you at all. If you need anything, feel free to dm me, I'm all ears
lol i knew i would get rejecterd shes one of my best friends im actuely happy i got rejected but this pome is more so about a love i lost a long time ago
Ahh I see. Well still, need anything, Dm me

Emma1234:

I love your Poem!!! you did AMAZING!!

NotLeiland:

when you feel insane ur laughing at everything thats wrong thinking of lighting someone on fire and runing down the alleyway thinking of runnin far far away yelling at the way things are im feeling like im going crazy i feel like im going crazy for the light in your eyes im going crazy insane feeling your hands are cold watching you walk off from one situation to the next wanting to comfort you ur cries never went unheard wanting to bring you in closely i feel like im going insane for you ur as bright as fire can be I'm running down the alleyway to you getting lost in my mind just thinking of you ur the light ive been seeking for forever feeling like im going insane insane for you the way you smile the way you light up a room the way ur lips are perfectly pink the way they part ever so slightly when you're suprised the way ur laugh is so light the way you play with your hands when your nervous the way you smile when you're in the moment its the way you make me go insane for you im going insane ur eyes light up like fireworks on the 4th of july you walk with the confidence like you were meant to be im going insane insane insane** (Sorry my OCD got the best of me)

MidniteSunny:

ong i feel dat leil lol, anyways tho gj girlie

pennalopee:

You did great I love it and sorry that happened to you dm me if you need to talk or anything

Kimberly44:

I love the poem, good work

Luigi0210:

good job

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