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Emma1234:

A poem I made! about my father This is for the dads who are emotionally abusive This is for the dads who are physically abusive This is for the dads who left their child in the cold winter day With tanks tops and shorts When there was frost on the windows For the times you made me feel worthless and lonley For the times i felt like i was stuck in your mindgames Controlling me with strings on my arms like a puppet. I felt scared looking into your eyes that were bright red as blood For the times you made me scared to say anything to you. For the times I wish you were there for me. Now I just see you as an abusier and not my father. For the times you were like a scary monster in my closet This is for the times you never had time for me For the times you manipulated me when I was 10 For the times you treated me like an animal. Told me I was a mistake For the times you told me no one would love me This is for the dads who are emotionally abusive This is for the dads who are physically abusive. This is for the dads who leave their child in the cold winter day For the times you threatend me For the times you told me no one wanted me I felt stuck in this box with all of your horrifying words The box holding me inside Me banging on the box to get out But you kept saying “no” Told me I belonged in the trash For the times you never went to any of my volleyball games. For the times you told me i was an embarrassment Treated me like i couldnt do anything right This is for the dads who are emotionally abusive This is for the dads who are physically abusive This is for the dads who leave their child in the cold winter day Now i'm doing amazing I'm out of the box you put me in I am loved for who I am Just know I still love you

Dolphan:

I absolutely love this. It's like, no matter how much pain you put me through, I will always love you. I feel this, I really do. Great work on the poem, never give up!!

Emma1234:

awwwww thank you bestie <33 I love youu <333 awwwww thank you so muchhh!!

Dolphan:

@emma1234 wrote:
awwwww thank you bestie <33 I love youu <333 awwwww thank you so muchhh!!
I love you too <333 Always here if you need anything!!

Emma1234:

Awwww same here bestie!!!! <33333

D3AD4YOU:

This is really heartfelt,deep, and inspiring. This is a "free verse" poem and i love it. Keep it up!

Emma1234:

awww thank youuu

Emma1234:

@d3ad4you wrote:
This is really heartfelt,deep, and inspiring. This is a "free verse" poem and i love it. Keep it up!
thank you so much!! this took my a while to make

laylapoisonous:

I Love the message that is put in it I Go through the same mess and Even though it hurts i still love him and never wanna put him in harms way cause i mean he also has other kids besides me and I don't wanna hurt them But anyways I Absolutely Love this poem and Hope to see more from you

NotLeiland:

Doesn't sound like the best fatherly figure I've heard of...

Emma1234:

he was not

NotLeiland:

Well I wish you the best in this journey we call life

emilysmith1105:

i feel like this is really good and people can relate :).

MidniteSunny:

i feel dis bro, truly felt it was bootiful to read, tysm for sharing <333 lovely job

JessicaDrew:

@2o99

Emma1234:

@midnitesunny wrote:
i feel dis bro, truly felt it was bootiful to read, tysm for sharing <333 lovely job
Thank you!

Emma1234:

@jessicadrew wrote:
@2o99
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Emma1234:

@emilysmith1105 wrote:
i feel like this is really good and people can relate :).
Thank you!!!

Emma1234:

@laylapoisonous wrote:
I Love the message that is put in it I Go through the same mess and Even though it hurts i still love him and never wanna put him in harms way cause i mean he also has other kids besides me and I don't wanna hurt them But anyways I Absolutely Love this poem and Hope to see more from you
Aww thank you also my dad has other children too. So I'm glad you connect with it! And ill be trying to make more!

dontmesswitnova:

yes girl i feel u

euphoriiic:

coolio

ihy:

That's amazing! Keep it up!

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