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(Repost, with fonts this time.)
This is a story I wrote, its called Decaying Winter.

Thank you @Riko for sharing his fonts!
Link here: https://questioncove.com/study#/updates/644a7d70904969aae487680

Y/N means Your/Name.


If you like it tell me, cuz I'll make part 2 if it does good.


Story is in replies. ⬇️⬇️⬇️

Answer 1

Decaying Winter
The quiet cold whirring of the engines fill the quiet, chilly atmosphere as you and your "Agent Wave" are headed toward the desolate wasteland known as "Eden-227". Y/N, A "Survivalist" . Is a new recruit to the AGENCY and is tasked with supporting the 4 more Experienced Agents , Survivalists are AGENTS without any given special equipment, they are only fitted a backpack filled with necessary survival materials. First aids and Rations. That is about it, Survivalists are newly hired AGENTS that have to prove they are competent enough to survive without any AGENT hardware. Once they achieve this, They will be given their respective equipment that the AGENCY deems fitting for them based on their results. ......

---Y/N's POV---
'I sneak gazes upon the 4, Despite the 3 of them sitting in the row in-front of me together, It seems one of them decided to sit right besides me, They all are out and about minding their own business, Noticeably, Each of them have different outfits and equipment. As per recommended by the AGENCY, I had access to the Documents regarding my Allies. Ive given each of them careful reads and even memorized them.'

'The one sitting Besides me... It must be Eva, Considering she's the only Female in our Agent Wave, I've heard Female Agents are a rarity.'

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Answer 2

Actually, even if this does bad, Im making part 2 ~ 3 because I havent really wrote the actual story. This is only like an introduction to the characters basically.

Answer 3

well i'm intrigued.. sounds pretty good

Answer 4

Sounds amazing. Never give up

Answer 5

You definitely put a lot of detail into the character... The story itself seems very interesting!

Answer 6

One thing I forgot to mention, ( ' ) before a sentence means that character is saying it in his mind. ( " ) before a sentence means that character is talking out loud. If there is nothing before a sentence and it's in Italic or bold font, it's explaining what the situation looks like.

Decaying Winter // Part 2 (Actual story starting..)

---Y/N's POV---
'Eva Eristov, She's a Sovereign. I've heard all throughout training that they were highly religious, and that being stabbed by their ritual daggers can Hex you, I've never seen one in action, let alone in person. But then again, It's not like I've met that much Agents.'

As she fiddles with her ritual daggers, you examine her more closely, you take note of her outfit, she wears a business suit all complete with a necktie, she has glasses accompanied by a mask with red lines scribed in where the cheeks are oriented, though her mask is currently lowered to her neck, revealing a scar going down from her left eye to her cheek. She seems to wear high waist denim shorts and thigh-high socks.

'Her outfit is... Quite revealing for someone heading to a planet devoid of a star, will she be okay?'

As Y/N takes note of her outfit, Suddenly-

"You have been staring at me for a while, Did i intrigue you that much?" Eva, Looking at you through the corner of her eyes, Suddenly spoke to you, Giving you quite the shock. 'Ah, I didn't notice, I was eyeing her down like im some kind of predator?! Oh uh. First impressions matter. If i dont-'

"I-Im sorry, Its just that-"

"It is my outfit? Yes?"

Eva says, Wearing a faint smile as she faces your general direction.

"A-Ah yes. Its just, We are heading to Eden-227 and-"

"Don't worry, This is nothing compared to what I've been through"

Eva answers over Y/N, it seems she's used to being asked the same question many times.

"O-Oh? I see."

'Compared to what she's been through...? What does she mean by that? Ive heard Eden-227 is infamous for its freezing atmospheres.'

"......Is that all you need to ask of me?"

"Yes, That is all."

"So, How'd you get into this line of work?"

Eva asks Y/N, All the while she goes through her bag, Checking out multiple Ritual Daggers.

"Oh, I..."

'Wait I... W-Why...? Why again...? I-I dont...'

Y/N seems to not have any memories at all prior to becoming an AGENT, They try their hardest but it seems only a blurry mess comes up. Their favorite Movies, if they ever had a pet, Hell, Even their own parents... Eva has been calling for Y/N multiple times by now, but Y/N continues to sink deeper through their thoughts.

---Eva's POV---

Eva was polishing her "Cytherean" Ritual Daggers, Checking for any leftover blood. Despite it being so old, It still is as sharp as it was first assigned to her all those years ago. But as she speaks to noone in particular...

'Another mission came up, Seems this'll be more harder than the others. Tasked with deploying to Eden-227 to study about the spreading outbreak. Though much more fierce, This environment does remind me of home. Oh how the good old days. I'd kill just for a chance to come back home, But as if killing will even remotely be enough now.'[/b] ...The new Agent has been eyeing her for awhile now. '...That's Y/N was it? The New Agent. Nothing special strikes about them, Except their Document having no information on it whatsoever, And i thought those are mandatory, Especially when working for the AGENCY. I'll have to learn more about them. They have not said much ever since this expedition started, Guess ill have to start the conversation.' "You have been staring at me for a while, Did i intrigue you that much?" "I-I'm sorry, Its just that-" 'It must be my Outfit, Not the first time this has happened' "It is my outfit, yes?" I say, With a smile as I don't suspect them of anything "A-Ah yes. Its just, We are heading to Eden-227 and-" "Don't worry, This is nothing compared to what I've been through" "O-Oh? I see." Eva watches Y/N as they scratch the back of their neck 'I Wonder how someone like them got into the AGENCY at all in the first place. They scream Average.' "......Is that all you need to ask of me?" I say, As i want to ask Y/N something else "Yes, That is all." "So, How'd you get into this line of work?" 'His document being empty might have been a mistake. But this is the Agency, There has to be something else' "Oh, I..." Y/N Pauses, His gaze slowly but surely leaning towards the floor, His expression changes to a more worried, Confused tone. it seems they are in deep thought 'They are... Shaking? I might have made him remember some things he might chosen not to. I guess he's been through more stuff than I thought, Must be personal. I wont pry any further' "Hey, Y/N? You don't have to tell me if you dont want to." ...Silence... "Y/N? Hey, Buddy. Hey?" ...Despite Eva calling for Y/N, They stay silent... Suddenly, Eva feels a gaze behind her. Despite the menacing red glow emitting, She may already have an idea of who this is "...Already hazing our Newb, Eva?" The Agent that spoke up in a tired tone was a Man that has streaks of what seems like hard rusted metal-like Flesh extruding on his back, Despite looking quite injured, He is completely fine, as he is an APOSTLE |