Question

"I was in love"
The darken clouds,
Turn to the darkened light of hell,
Hell that shows nothing less of what I feel,
The feeling of love,
The feeling of losing you to her,
The fear of not being yours,
Opened skies,
The lies,
The cries for help at night,
I was in love with you,
You just left nothing,
But the help of the skies crying out,
Nothing,
But the love I thought you had,
The fact you lied to me,
You used me,
And led me to this,
The piece of paper with your hand writing,
Promising me the best life I could ever have.

Answer 1

This is fantastic. I relate to this so much. Thank you for posting this poem it has made me realize I'm not the only one. Great job and keep it up.

Answer 2

This is great keep up the good work don't give up or anything and I feel you on this.

Answer 3

I love it and I can also relate on this thank you for sharing this with us and keep up the good work please tag me in more of your work I would love to see them.

Answer 4

@swaggymark

Answer 5

this is very good, i know people can relate qnd you write good:)

Answer 6

Nice

Answer 7

Good job! You're a very talented writer!

Answer 8

i love this T^T this is the type of thing id read at 2 am on pintrest and cry about it tT^T^T

Answer 9

Thank y'all so much

Answer 10

🤍

Answer 11

this is cute i feel you man

Answer 12

I felt this. This is absolutely beautiful and I feel as if so many people who have read this, have felt it too. This is amazing. Keep up the work, it's beautiful!!

Answer 13

This is so real, it's amazing

Answer 14

I love that this came from the heart <3333