Something I wrote that was sad. ❤️‍🩹

Love is beautiful, yet why am I shedding tears?
I won't be able to forget you, as you're the only one in my memories
Love sick, Love sick, what should I do now?
I love you, but I won't be able to meet you again.

Question

Something I wrote that was sad. ❤️‍🩹
 
Love is beautiful, yet why am I shedding tears?
I won't be able to forget you, as you're the only one in my memories
Love sick, Love sick, what should I do now?
I love you, but I won't be able to meet you again.

xXAikoXx · Answer

(My old writings from 2017)

AnimeWeeebLMAO · Answer

Very sad darling, I'm sh*ttin.... I mean I'm sobbing real tears.

Dolphan · Answer

This hit me real hard. Sometimes when you love someone, you could be in pain, maybe that is why your shedding tears. No one will be able to forget that one person, all your left was with the good and bad memories. One day you'll find love again, don't rush it. You still have your whole life. I absolutely loved this. Great job on it. Keep working hard!!

Krissy525 · Answer

I felt this all the way. Makes me remember my brother. May he have a good life in heaven. Keep up the good work.

xXAikoXx · Answer

@krissy525 wrote:

I felt this all the way. Makes me remember my brother. May he have a good life in heaven. Keep up the good work.

I'm genuinely sorry for your loss... May your brother rest in piece. ❤

xXAikoXx · Answer

Peace*

emilysmith1105 · Answer

this is sad.. i'm sure a lot of people can relate, good writing

GhostSpider · Answer

I'm sorry about your brother.. 💜

ElexusQuimby · Answer

I can 100% relate to this. Thank you for posting.  You did a great job on the poem.  It is very sad but very deep. Keep up the great work.

Krissy525 · Answer

@ghostspider wrote:

I'm sorry about your brother.. 💜

@xxaikoxx wrote:

@krissy525 wrote:

I felt this all the way. Makes me remember my brother. May he have a good life in heaven. Keep up the good work.

I'm genuinely sorry for your loss... May your brother rest in piece. ❤

Thank you guys. He's no longer suffering but thinking about him still tears me apart. Thank you so much.

urdadizhere · Answer

real

Tbone · Answer

@krissy525 wrote:

@ghostspider wrote:

I'm sorry about your brother.. 💜

@xxaikoxx wrote:

@krissy525 wrote:

I felt this all the way. Makes me remember my brother. May he have a good life in heaven. Keep up the good work.

I'm genuinely sorry for your loss... May your brother rest in piece. ❤

Thank you guys. He's no longer suffering but thinking about him still tears me apart. Thank you so much.

If he killed himself he's in hell ☠️☠️

baconway · Answer

You should write a song. That's a good start for one. You should use the outline I use:  verse, chorus, 2nd verse, chorus, bridge, chorus, and then your outro. It is a bit repetitive if you do it this way but it still sounds nice. And I wanna see a whole song from this bc I think it would be really good

MidniteSunny · Answer

ong so tru bro, thinkin bout all mah dead loved ones w/ dis

NotLeiland · Answer

@baconway wrote:

You should write a song. That's a good start for one. You should use the outline I use: verse, chorus, 2nd verse, chorus, bridge, chorus, and then your outro. It is a bit repetitive if you do it this way but it still sounds nice. And I wanna see a whole song from this bc I think it would be really good

ChatGPT Outline be like>>> fr

ctomk3743 · Answer

This Is nice very sad and good 10/10 and btw I was trying to text you but you weren't accepting my texting

Krissy525 · Answer

@tbone wrote:

@krissy525 wrote:

@ghostspider wrote:

I'm sorry about your brother.. 💜

@xxaikoxx wrote:

@krissy525 wrote:

I felt this all the way. Makes me remember my brother. May he have a good life in heaven. Keep up the good work.

I'm genuinely sorry for your loss... May your brother rest in piece. ❤

Thank you guys. He's no longer suffering but thinking about him still tears me apart. Thank you so much.

If he killed himself he's in hell ☠️☠️

He died of cancer tyvm

baconway · Answer

@notleiland wrote:

@baconway wrote:

You should write a song. That's a good start for one. You should use the outline I use: verse, chorus, 2nd verse, chorus, bridge, chorus, and then your outro. It is a bit repetitive if you do it this way but it still sounds nice. And I wanna see a whole song from this bc I think it would be really good

ChatGPT Outline be like>>> fr

Yeah it's a basic outline and if you put in all your rhymes/sentences it puts them together which is really helpful bc me personally am bad at all my punctuation

NotLeiland · Answer

@baconway wrote:

@notleiland wrote:

@baconway wrote:

You should write a song. That's a good start for one. You should use the outline I use: verse, chorus, 2nd verse, chorus, bridge, chorus, and then your outro. It is a bit repetitive if you do it this way but it still sounds nice. And I wanna see a whole song from this bc I think it would be really good

ChatGPT Outline be like>>> fr

Yeah it's a basic outline and if you put in all your rhymes/sentences it puts them together which is really helpful bc me personally am bad at all my punctuation

Real

lea0728 · Answer

its cute

YouMyPlug · Answer

fax

Outcast · Answer

may god bless you and your loved ones.

Outcast · Answer

ykw god bless all of you

xXAikoXx · Answer

@outcast wrote:

ykw god bless all of you

<3 God bless youuu