Question

I accidentally just closed my post so I'm reposting it
Here's another song I just finished. Sorry if some of it doesn't make sense it was hard to find some synonyms for some of the words.

I'm just a kid, but I feel so old
Trapped in my mind, my thoughts are so cold
My dreams are like a battlefield, I can't escape
The nightmares take control, and my mind starts to break

I'm losing my grip, I'm losing my mind
The darkness is my friend, but it's not kind
My mental health is slipping away
I'm crying in my sleep, but no one hears what I say

I try to reach out, but I'm scared to speak
I feel so alone, like I'm up a creek
I need someone to help me, to guide me through
My dreams are attacking me, what can I do?

I'm losing my grip, I'm losing my mind
The darkness is my friend, but it's not kind
My mental health is slipping away
I'm crying in my sleep, but no one hears what I say

I need a light, to guide me through the night
I need a friend, to help me win the fight
I'm just a kid, but I feel so old
I need someone to hold, before I fold

I'm losing my grip, I'm losing my mind
The darkness is my friend, but it's not kind
My mental health is slipping away
I'm crying in my sleep, but no one hears what I say

I'm just a kid, lost in the dark
My mind is a prison, and I'm the mark
The nightmares won't stop, they're here to stay
I'll cry myself to sleep, as I slowly decay.

Answer 1

Its so deep, I like this.

Answer 2

You have a way of making big impacts with simple rhymes that I have never seemed to master; Good job!